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"And when they're running for the hills, let them spread the word. Briarclan is too be feared!" He said, and again, the clan roared it's approval. Starclan, it seems, had made their choice."

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Sunday, August 15, 2010

Kits Of a Leader Part 8- Searingpaw/Swiftstar

         As Ravensoar, Searingpaw, and Duskgaze appeared back outside camp, Duskgaze doubled over in pain. The others looked worriedly at her, but she waved her tail.
   "Go on... I'm fine. I just need to recover." she said. And then headed into camp. Searingpaw looked around camp.
     "She never got to tell me if she feels the same way that I do for her...." he whispered to himself. "The battle is coming, and she could get hurt!" He exclaimed. "What can I do to stop it.... Duskgaze's power is draining...." he trailed off looking out of camp. "What if she gets killed, and I can never see her again?" he murmured. Suddenly, Shadeshadow walked up to him.
    "She can't." she said. "She's a cat of the prophecy." Shadeshadow looked at him in the eyes. Her eyes look like Frostriver's.... he thought with a pain. His heart hurt.
   "I never told anyone this. And don't tell anyone yourself." she whispered. "I can see into the future. I didn't even knew it myself. I thought it was normal. But I see you." she said. "And I see her." she said. "And I can't say no more, but both of you WILL live, if I have anything to say about it." Shadeshadow said. "When the battle comes, and the winners stand, their greatest strength will be lost." she whispered, then walked away, leaving Searingpaw standing there, gaping.
    Was that a prophecy? he thought. It doesn't matter. We have to be ready, and the whole clan already can feel it's coming. But when this is over, I'm getting her back. he thought with determination, and looked at Floe and Ravensoar and their kits.
     Maybe we can be happy like them.

>Searingpaw<

Swiftstar was padding along the river, her eyes filled with sorrow. The prophecy rung in her ears everyday, and everyday it grew stronger.

"You have two choices
only one you can cover.
One leads to death,
and death the other.
Then an obstacle,
you cannot pass.
so live each day,
like it's your last."

She remembered when Greystar gave her the prophecy. It seemed like moons ago, which it was.

     "To find your last peace your heart must be searing like a flame." someone spoke, and she almost fell. Slowly, she turned around.
      "I came to find you." he said. "This black cat- the one who looked just like you, told me to tell you. That. That to find your last peace your hear must be searing like a flame." he said. Swiftstar looked confused.
   "Your... having kits?" he asked, staring at her belly. "And you didn't tell me?" Brass said. "I-I-" Swiftstar stuttered, but Brass rushed over to her. "That's lovely! Wonderful! Fantastic!" He purred. "They'll be beautiful, like you." he said. Swiftstar smiled.
    "I missed you." Brass said. "I missed you so much. I thought you might've died. But no! Your still alive."
But not for long. Swiftstar thought sadly, with a twinge of pain. But that pain spread, and she collapsed on the ground.
    What's... the kits! "The kits are coming." Swiftstar said shakily.  "Great Starclan!" Brass explained. "I've helped my mother deliver a later litter of kits. I can do this." he said. "Now push." he said. "Oh! And here's a stick!" he said, picking up a stick and shoving in her face, and she bit down onto it.
          She felt the kit come out and sighed. She saw Brass bend over and nip the kit's sac and it started mewling. "That's it." he said.
   "That's it?" she asked. Brass nodded. "Yup. It's a tom. And a hansom one too, if i do say so myself." he said, chuckling. The tom had the same bracken-colored fur as Brass.
    "Bronzekit." he said. "Can he be called Bronzekit?" he asked. "Of course, and let him be prophecy free." she breathed, licking the kit on the head.
    "Who knows if he'll remember me?"  she said. "I'll miss him so much. Almost as much as you." Swiftstar said to Brass.
    "Don't talk like that! You know what? Tell this 'Starclan' that if they want to take your life, they have to get through me first." he said.
     "I'll try. But we have to get back to camp now. I mean I have to get back. Before the clan notices I'm gone." said, picking up Bronzekit who squeaked in protest.
      "Take care of our son." Brass said quietly. And Swiftstar nodded. "I will." and with that, she walked in the direction of camp, with Brass looking on.

>Swiftstar<

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♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostriver screeched. There was so much pain.

"I'm sorry. I won't run off ever again." she said to Willowsun.

>Frostriver<

✠Ember✠ said...

Willowsun growled "You better not!"

~-~Willowsun~-~

With Willowsun focousing her energy on punishing Frostriver Darkbreeze began to fight it. He managed to break free he tackled Willowsun pinning her down
"Leave. Her. Alone!"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostriver took a step back, her eyes widening.

>Frostriver<

Searingpaw sighed, looking up at the sky.

>Searingpaw<

Duskgaze finally got back up, walking into camp.

>Duskgaze<

✠Ember✠ said...

Willowsun focoused her energy on Darkbreeze again making him back up "Never do that again,"

"Sorry Willowsun, that was uncalledfor," Darkbreeze was forced to say he bared his teeth hissing lightly

~-~Willowsun~-~

Ravensoar looked at Duskgaze "Feeling better?"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yeah, kinda." Duskgaze said. She turned around and saw Swiftstar walk through the camp with a small kit in her jaws.

>duskgaze<

Frostriver clenched her teeth holding back a hiss.

>Frostriver<

MadiShae said...

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MadiShae said...

(The "aww" was a lot longer.)

MadiShae said...

*He perked his ears at the sound of someone entering camp and looked to see Swiftstar and a small kit. Thunderspirit rushed up to her.*

Swiftstar! Are you okay?

Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

(Thunderspirit! Oh gosh...)

"Yeah, I'm fine." she mumbled.

>Swiftstar<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar put his tail around his sister's shoulders "You sure?"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Darkbreeze growled, wondering where Frozenstar was, and if she saw his little outburst

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"For now." she breathed.

>Duskgaze<

Breezeflame walked up in front of Frostriver.

"So what happened to the fearless leader of the prophecy cats now?" he said, chuckling, and clawed her nose, making blood spray from it.

>Breezeflame<

MadiShae said...

(Yeah, uh huh.)

T-The kit. Our kit.

*He stammered, looking surprised.*

Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yeah." she said.

>Swiftstar<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze growled fighting Willowsun's control "Leave her alone," he growled

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No." Breezeflame said, smiling.

>Breezeflame<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze unsheathed his claws "She's you sister how can you be so cruel?"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Charcoalkit lay down the mouse they caught "Time to eat?"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Because that's just how I am." Breezeflame said.

>Breezeflame<

"Yup!" Murkkit said.

>Murkkit<

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Blossompatch padded up to Darkbreeze. She flicked her tail.

"Calm down." Blossompatch whispered, temporarily not under mind control.

<>*Blossompatch*<>

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze gritted his teeth and nodded "I guess we are all stuck like this forever,"
~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Who knows. Maybe someone strong enough will kill Willowsun." Frostriver whispered.

>Frostriver<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots padded up to Nimbleheart.

"Being a warrior is way better then being an apprentice!" he exclaimed.

>Yellowspots<

✠Ember✠ said...

"You can hope," Darkbreeze growled

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart grinned. "I know!Its so great because you aren't so limited as when we were apprentices!"Nimbleheart exclaimed.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"It could happen." Frostriver insisted.

>Frostriver<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yup, we don't have to be bossed around as much!"

>Yellowspots<

savortheflavor said...

"Being a warrior makes me feel...I dunno...Stronger-ish."Nimbleheart said with a weird tone.

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots laughed.

"Stronger-ish?"

>Yellowspots<

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart nodded.He puffed himself out a bit to look bigger.Nimbleheart sighed,looking his normal size again, and laughed a little. "Don't tell me you don't feel the same in strength."Nimbleheart said jokingly.

~Nimbleheart

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze sighed "I guess..."

Willowsun glared at them "Go hunt, Darkbreeze, Frostriver and Blossompatch and don't try to escape, only hunt,"

Darkbreeze felt his paws carrying him out of camp, he tried to run to BriarClan but her hold was stronger

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostriver nodded , and followed Darkbreeze out of camp.

>Frostriver<

"I do, but i don't make up words for it." Yellowspots said.

>Yellowspots<

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Blossompatch followed Darkbreeze against her will.

"We've got to find someone to help us!" Blossompatch growled. "Or else we may have to stay under Willowsun's mind control... for a long, long time."

<>*Blossompatch*<>

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart smiled. "Okay.I guess that's good."

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots chuckled.

>Yellowspots<

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart sat down."Would you like to go hunting?"

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze snorted "I know, but her power is too strong now... she needs to be weakened, but how?"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Someone on the outside, that she's not expecting." she said. "Maybe."

>Frostriver<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Sure!" Yellowspots said.

>Yellowspots<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze sighed, as he stiffened. He crouched wih out really noticing soon catching a mouse

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart's smile grew. "Where would you like to go hunting?"

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"By the split ground." Yellowspots said.


>Yellowspots<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostriver leaped in the air, catching a sparrow.

>Frostriver<

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart nodded. "Okay."Nimbleheart began to walk in the direction of Split Ground.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Race ya!" Yellowspots exclaimed, bolting off.

>Yellowspots<

savortheflavor said...

"Hey!"Nimbleheart shouted.Nimbleheart quickly dashed off,behind Yellowspots.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots laughed and picked up speed.

>Yellowspots<

savortheflavor said...

"Cheater!"Nimbleheart shouted,jokingly. Nimbleheart decided to keep the same pace for a while.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots rolled his eyes, suddenly stopping and pricking his ears. Leaping in the air, he plucked thrush that was taking off and killed it with a swifty bite.

>Yellowspots<

savortheflavor said...

"Nice one!" Nimbleheart said padding up to Yellowspots.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots smiled.

"Thanks." he said, looking for more prey.

>Yellowspots<

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart turned his head in the other direction.Nimbleheart's ear twitched.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots spotted a mouse and began stalking toward it.

>Yellowspots<

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

*Wildpaw came crashing out of the bracken and ran straight into Nimbleheart*
"Ss-s-sorry!" she stammered.

*she looked at Nimbleheart apologetically*

I was chasing a mouse and....I didnt see u...

~Wildpaw

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart spotted something in the corner of his eye as he turned his head more.He couldn't quite make out what it was,without thinking nor looking Nimbleheart quickly turned and pounced.When he thought that it was too big for prey. When he looked down,he realized he had pounced onto Yellowspots.

~Nimbleheart

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart slightly stumbled. "Um.Its all right."He replied without looking up at Wildpaw. "Sorry Yellowspots!"Nimbleheart said to Yellowspot,looking directly at him.

~Nimbleheart

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

*Wildpaw sighed. Why was she always getting into trouble? She was always careful......*

Okay now what? she asked

~Wildpaw

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots rolled his eyes.

"S'okay." he said, and looked at Wildpaw.

"Hi."

>Yellowspots<

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

*she looked at Yellowspots*

"hi," she mumbled, looking at her paws.

~Wildpaw

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart plopped down. He didn't say anything. I can't believe I just did that!It was so stupid! Nimbleheart thought to himself.

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"You ok?" Yellowspots asked Nimbleheart worriedly.

>Yellowspots<

savortheflavor said...

"Yeah!Sure!"Nimbleheart said perking up and standing up straight.Nimbleheart looked at Wildpaw.

~Nimbleheart

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

Wildpaw looked at Nimbleheart, and saw the cat's embarrassed look. She guessed Nimbleheart felt the same way she did.......

I can't believe I ran into Nimbleheart!

Then she heard crashing and a dog-like sent washed over her.

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots picked up the scent and growled.

>Yellowspots<

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

Wildpaw hissed and hallucinated YEllowspots was a fox and leaped at him (or her?).

"Stupid foz!" Wildpaw hissed, still hallucinating, clawed at Yellowspot's pelt.

(LOL!!!)

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart flattened his ears.He stood up. That's just great! Nimbleheart shook his head.His eyes flickered around.He sniffed the air.

~Nimbleheart

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw was padding through the forest looking for some fresh moss when she heard someone yell "Fox!" she ran over "Where the-" she stopped looking at the strange scene in front of her

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

Wildpaw was still hallucintating she was attacking a foz instead of her Clanmate and jumped on Nimbleheart, shredding his ears.

"OFF MY TERRITORY!" she yowled right in his ears.

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots spotted Thistlepaw.

"Hey. There are foxes close by." he told her.

>Yellowspots<

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

Still hallucinating sdhe was fighting fozex, attacked the poor Thisltpaw and tried to attack, but landed a tail-leangth short, hissing in rage.

She scra,mbled to her paws.

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw nodded "And what is she doing?" Thistlepaw asked puzzled by Wildpaw's strange behavior

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart knocked Wildpaw off of Thistlepaw.Wildpaw pinned her down "What are you doing?!"Nimbleheart hissed.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots slid in between her and Thistlepaw before she could attack again, bearing his teeth.

>Yellowspots<

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...
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✠Ember✠ said...

"Um..." Thistlepaw stood there confused

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"We don't have time for this!" yellowspots. "Stop it!" he said to Wildpaw.

>Yellowspots<

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

She stopped hallucinating and saw all her Clanmates llooking at her strangley.

"What?" she asked, bewildered.

~Wildpaw

savortheflavor said...

"What are you thinking?!"Nimbleheart asked Wildpaw.

~Nimbleheart

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

"uhh....." she trailed off. They all looked at her as if she had two heads and four ears.

"I'm sorry!" she hissed.

~Wildpaw

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw growled rolling her eyes at the apprentice, she began to search for the foxes

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

"I dont know!" she spat at Nimbleheart. SHe bgan to search for fozrs like Thistlepaw.


~Wildpaw

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

"I dont know!" she spat at Nimbleheart. SHe bgan to search for fozrs like Thistlepaw.


~Wildpaw

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart let Wildpaw get up. "Just be quiet,okay?"

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"And don't do that again!" Yellowspots scolded.

>Yellowspots<

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

"I'm not a newborn kit, Yellowspots!!!," she hissed, her lips pulling back into a snarl. "So don't scold me as if I'm one!"

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

"I'm not a newborn kit, Yellowspots!!!," she hissed, her lips pulling back into a snarl. "So don't scold me as if I'm one!"

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart covered her mouth with his tail. "Are you trying to let the foxes find us first?!"Nimbleheart whispered. "Why don't you just run out there and lead them to us while you're at it!" Nimbleheart didn't intentionally try to be rude or mean but his main concern was keeping quiet,and Wildpaw was only causing a mess.

~Nimbleheart

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

She nipped the tom's tail sharply and hissed. She would rather be be dead then taste Nimbleheart's fur.

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart was loosing patience,quickly. He slightly jumped when he felt Wildpaw's teeth in his tail.Nimbleheart batted her with his paw,claws sheathed(thankfully),hard."Hush!"He hissed.
~Nimbleheart

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

Wildpaw was sick of bing treated as if she was nothing in BriarClan. She unsheatjed her long, curved claws and slit her own throat. The wound began pulsing blood instantly and within heartbeats Wildpaw was laying slumped motionless on the ground., a red pool gathering beneath her neck. Her eyes faded and reflected only the clouds going acorss the sky.

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

Somehow she's still alive and Wildpaw tottered to her paws unsteadily. She still was sick of being trweated as if she nothing to her Clanmates and pelted to Split ground and launched herself into the ground, her endless wail to be heard forever.

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart watched Wildpaw dash off. He look at Yellowspots. "What do we do?"

~Nimbleheart

ღѕтαяgαzєз26ღ said...

She splastters on the ground.

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots took a step backward in shock.

>Yellowspots<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Suddenly Duskgaze stood up.

"Oh, not again." she said and ran out of camp against her will.

>Duskgaze<

"Hey Charcoalkit. Can you hear the voices?" Murkkit asked abruptly.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Well, not really, one time I thought I did, but that might have been my imagination..."

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"What did he say?" Murkkit pressed.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I don't know, something about following his voice, it must have been n a dream though,"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Maybe we need to follow it." Murkkit insisted.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I don't know, didn't dad tell us not to listen to te voice? But it might be interesting!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yeah, what if he's just mistaken. Maybe it can lead us to a way to help Briarclan!" she exclaimed.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Okay! Lets do it!" Charcoalkit mewed her fur fluffed up with excitement

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Okay! Well, it's saying we have to go out of camp." she said, making sure no one was looking and rushed out of camp with Charcoalkit close behind.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Now where?" Charcoalkit

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

She pointed to where the line of trees thinned out.

"This way."

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit followed her ister, becoming more and more uneasy

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I think we're almost there!"

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit was shaking "I don't like it here!"

~-~Charcoakit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"We have to keep going!" She said as they emerged in a clearing with Frostfire, Willowsun, and the others.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Daddy was right, we shouldn't have listened," she mewed looking at all the cats

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Who knows. Maybe he was wrong. Maybe they can help us." she whispered, stepping forward to look at Breezeflame.

"Why have you brought us here?" she asked.

>Murkkit<

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Blossompatch's eyes widened.

"Go! Leave!!!!" Blossompatch almost screeched at the BriarClan kits.

<>*Blossompatch*<>

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkkit took a step back, but stayed there.

be QUIET! Breezeflame thought to Blossompatch.

>Murkkit/Breezeflame<

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Blossompatch growled.

"Never!" She spat at Breezeflame. "Go kits. Before they do bad things!"

<>*Blossompatch*<>

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkkit still stayed where she was, frozen.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit's eyes widened "Darkbreeze? Is he here? I heard daddy talking about him... his brother or something, is he here?"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yes, he is here kis." Breezeflame said. "He's right here." he said, and nodded to Willowsun.

>Breezeflame<

✠Ember✠ said...

Willowsun nodded and forced Darkbreeze up "Welcome kits," she forced him to say, making him smile warmly "Come say hello to your uncle," he purred. He grit his teeth glaring at Willowsun, trying to tell the kits to run

~-~Willowsun~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Hi, Darkbreeze!" Murkkit said, smiling.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze smiled "Come, I'll show you around my home!" he purred

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Charcoalkit looked at Murkkit "Come on! We can trust Darkbreeze, he is kin!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

These words stung Darkbreeze "Ru-run," he gapsed out but not sure if would listen

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkkit looked confused for a second, but followed.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit followed her sister "We can't stay long, mommy and daddy will get worried,"

~-~Charcoalki~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"But we haven't seen Darkbreeze in a while! I'm sure we can stay a little bit." Murkkit said.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"No, you didn't see how daddy and mommy reaced when you got stolen, maybe we should go back and tell them where we are and then come visit Darkbreeze for a while, just so they know we are safe!"

~-~Charcoalkit~+~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"But what if they don't let us come back?"

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"They have too! Darkbreeze would let us! He's nice!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I know but...." Murkkit trailed off. "The voices led us here for a reason. We should be here right now .

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit shook her head "I don't like those voices much! We are probably just imagining them," Charcoalkit rolled her eyes "Don't take it so seriously!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No, they are real! I know it!" Murkkit insisted, digging her claws in the ground.

"C'mon."

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Murkkit you're being stupid! How do you know we can trust any cat here! Remember what that black she-cat said! Run! And so did Darkbreeze, there is something weird here! I don't get a good feeling about this place!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No, your being stupid. We are meant to be here. At least I am. If your too scared I'll do this by myself!"

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I'm not too scared! I'm being smart! We walk into this strange clan then you decide to stay? We don't even know if Darkbreeze is really are uncle! He could be lying!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"It doesn't matter. I'm not backing down now." Murkkit said darkly.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"No! We are going to go home right now! If you don't come with me I'll tell dad and he'll come get you again! "

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I'd like to see him try." Murkkit growled.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Stop acting so weird Murkkit! You're being mean! Do you even want to go back to BriarClan!? It's HOME!" she growled her eyes glowing

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkkit shrugged. "Your the one being mean! And i don't know..." Murkkit growled back.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"No! You're the one who wants to hurt mom and dad by never coming back! Don't you love them anymore?"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I'll come back. I will. But right now I need to be here." she said.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Why!? Tell me why!" Charcoalkit asked

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Because of the voice. I hear it the strongest. It must mean something. I really can't explain it.... just, let me be here"

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Fine!" Charcoalkit yowled "Fine! Leave me and mom and dad I don't care! I don't care if you EVER come back!" she growled running out of the camp as fast as she could tears falling from her eyes, she could barely see

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkkit looked on, sadness in her gaze. She felt someone's tail on her shoulder, and saw it was Frostriver.

"It was for the best."

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit ran to her mother "Murkkit! Left! She said she wanted to stay at this weird clan with Darkbreeze and other wierd cats!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe's eyes widened.

"No....."

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit sighed "I-i dont know if she will ever come back! I-i told her i didnt care if she ever did, but I didn't mean it! Now she's gonna hate me!" she cried

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No, it's okay. We'll get her back." Floe reassured her.

"Ravensoar!"

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar ran over to Floe "What is it?" he asked

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Murkkit. She went to Brokenclan with Charcoalkit and she won't come back." Floe said.

>Floe<

Murkkit sighed. "It's all my fault. But I guess the most important things come with a cost." she said.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar growled digging his claws into the ground "How? Why?" he growled

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe turned at Charcoalkit.

"Why did she stay there?"

>Floe<

Murkkit looked at Darkbreeze.

"Should I stay here?" she asked him.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I don't know! Voices have been talking to both of us, but more to her, they were telling her to go there,'

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

Darkbreeze sighed "I guess, but you have to know, not all of the cats here are nice, sometimes Frostriver and I aren't nice..."

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"But that doesn't matter if I'm meant to be here. I'll have to deal with it." Murkkit pressed.

>Murkkit<

"Breezeflame." Floe growled. "She could be thinking that she's saving the clan with him spouting nonsense in her head!"

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar growled fury bubbling inside him he turned to Charcoalkit "You are not allowed out of camp EVER you understand that?!"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Darkbreeze sighed "Well here is evil,"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"The voices say it's good." Murkkit said back.

>Murkkit<

"We should get her back again." Floe said.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"The voices?" Darkbreeze rolled his eyes "You might be hearing Breezeflame, who is, evil, and wants to mess with BriarClan, so he might be telling you its god, but they are trying to destroy BriarClan and Willowsun, is using mind control on me, Frostriver and Blossompatch, the only reason I can tell you this is becuse shes not paying attention, so her hold isn't as strong,"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Ravensoar nodded "Spiritedpaw!" he called to his kin "Make sure Charcoalkit stays here!"

The young apprentice nodded and Ravensoar sighed "We'll both go right?"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yes."

>Floe<

Murkkit smiled. "But did you ever considered that Willowsun is controlling me, too?"

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Well tell me, is she? You can tell it's mind control,"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Ravensoar nodded padding out of camp with her

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkkit looked into the trees, saying nothing.

"If it wasn't, I wouldn't be here." Murkkit whispered.

>Murkkit<

Floe followed close behind, scanning the trees.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze sighed "Willowbreeze has gone too low, my brothers kit! I mean, seriously..." he muttered

~-Darkbreeze~-~

Ravensoar growled "My kits! How dare BrokenClan mess with our kits!" he growled

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Maybe it's because they're half Brokenclan." Floe said quietly.

>Floe<

Murkkit looked down at the ground.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar nuzzled Floe "I won't let them get to you or Charcoalkit and we are gonna Murkkit back,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Darkbreeze sighed licking Murkkit's ear "We'll help you, it gets easier to fight the mind control after a while,"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I hope so." was all Floe said.

>Floe<

"But.. I don't want to go." Murkkit said.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Thats the control, I think, unless you want to stay in this awful place, wich makes no sence,"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Ravensoar sighed

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Does Breezeflame or Willowsun make any sense? They aren't mind controlled." Murkkit said.

>Murkkit<

"C'mon. Let's get fight some pieces of fox-dung."

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"But they are cruel, evil, heartless, I could go on and on."

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Ravensoar nodded "On three we burst into camp, ready?"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"You know if you go one she'll hurt you. Do you think I don't know that?" Murkkit said.

>Murkkit<

Floe nodded, shaking.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze growled smiling "Crazy, something must be wrong with both of their heads, traitors, and jerks,"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Ravensoar pressed against her "Are you okay?"

~-Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No. but we are barging into camp, just the two of us, against a whole clan."

>Floe<

"Yeah, I'm crazy, too." Murkkit said, smiling.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze growled "Whats wrong with you? Do you want to be evil?"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Ravensoar sighed "I can do this myself if you don't want to I don't want to put you in danger,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkkit shrugged. "Maybe."

>Murkkit<

"No, No. It's for our daughter."

>floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"You don't know what you're getting yourself into," Darkbreeze sighed padding away

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Ravensoar nodded running into the camp "Where is Murkkit?" he asked his voice calm but he was furious inside

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"It doesn't matter." Murkkit mumbled to herself.

>Murkkit<

Frostriver remained silent. Breezeflame walked over to him.

"Here." he said.

>Breezeflame/Frostriver<

Floe followed him in.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Well then, I want my daughter back, she does not belong here,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Charcoalkit sobbed into Spiritedpaw's fur mumbling about how much Murkkit must hate her now, Spiritedpaw just stood there, eyes wide, nut sure what to do

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"She came here willingly." he said calmly.

>Breezeflame<

Copperflare walked out from the apprentices den, eying Spirtedpaw and Charcoalkit.

>Copperflare<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I do not care, she is too young to make any of her own desicoins, and how do I know that Willowsun isn't just controlling her? I will be able to tell,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Spiritedpaw looked at his father, eyes pleading

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Copperflare nodded, padding up to them.

"Charcoalkit, it's going to be okay." he said. "They're going to bring her back."

>Copperflare<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit looked up to him with big eyes "R-really?"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

Spritedpaw nodded to his father \

Thank-you! he mouthed

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Copperflare did a small nodd to Spiritedpaw, and looked at Charcoalkit.

"Yes, really."

>Copperflare<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit smiled "Than I can say sorry!!!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Copperflare nodded encouragingly.

>Copperflare<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Daddy and mommy need to come back soon! I'll go get them!" Charcoalkit mewed racing out of camp

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No, wait Charcoalkit don't!" Copperflare called after her.

>Copperflare<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Murkkit!" Breezeflame called, and the she-kit came out.

>Breezeflame<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit didn't listen she followed the path her and Murkkit followed earlier she saw her mother and father at the entrance she looked up at Floe "Hey mommy!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

"Murkkit, come on you're going home, I don't care if you don't want to,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No. I'm staying here." Murkkit said firmly.

>Murkkit<

"What are you doing here?" Floe hissed quietly.

>Floe<

Copperflare bounded after her, skidding to a halt when he saw the Brokenclan camp.

>Copperflare<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I'm gonna say sorry to Murkkit!" Charcoalkit purred pushing past her mother running up to Murkkit I'm sorry for saying I didn't care if you didn't come home, I didnt mean it, I'd really miss you if you didn't cause your my sister,"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

Ravensoar looked at Floe speechless

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"It's for the best." Murkkit said.

>Murkkit<

Floe just looked at her daughters in horror.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Come on Murkkit time to go home! I saw this really plump starling and I told Spiritedpaw to save it for us!" Charcoalkit purred not understanding what was going on

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No, I'm not going home."

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Chrcoalkit's lip began to quiver "Why? What about me? Why are you leaving mom and dad and me? You don't even know people here that well! Please?"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"You can join us." Murkkit said.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"But, this place is going against home, I heard mommy and daddy talking about it... why would we stay here?" Charcoalkit mewed

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Because this is where we belong. IF we surrender, then no one will get hurt."

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Surrender to what?" Charcoalkit asked

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"To Brokenclan." Murkkit said, her eyes glowing.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"But we can't BriarClan cats won't surrender!!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

✠Ember✠ said...

"And I won't betray you or BriarClan Murkkit!"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"You would rather let cats die?" Murkkit asked.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"No, if mommy and daddy and all of BriarClan wont be in danger I'll stay...." Charcoalkit muttered looking down

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkkit smiled.

"Thank you." she said.

>Murkkit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit sighed, not wanting to stay, but she didn't want her Clan to get hurt, but if Murkkit thought she was joining she was crazy, she would always she part of BriarClan

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

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