Anyone Still here can join. Will start trying to make posts soon. XD

"And when they're running for the hills, let them spread the word. Briarclan is too be feared!" He said, and again, the clan roared it's approval. Starclan, it seems, had made their choice."

whos.amung.us

Friday, August 20, 2010

The End of the End of the Beginning

      Frozenstar looked around the clearing at all the cats below. It was time. She waved her tail, a silent signal, and all cats exchanged an excited glance. Most of them, anyway. We will win, with the prophecy cats, it's more than an even match.
      "It is time! We will go, now!" Frozenstar exclaimed, and she stalked out of camp with all the other cats of BrokenClan following. They soon crossed the border, heading towards the heart of BriarClan territory. Then they crouched on the sides of it, ready to spring.....

>Frozenstar<

       Searingflame finally came back into camp, but he felt like he was being followed. By who? He knew, he smelled it. It was BrokenClan. "BROKENCLAN ARE-" he began to warn the clan but was cut off as a huge mass of cats leaped into the camp, their eyes gleaming with the wild light of battle.
     The other cats of BriarClan came out of their dens who weren't already in the clearing, and the whole ground became a mass of screeching knots of fur. Searingflame scanned the ground, and with a pang he saw Frostriver pinning down Duskgaze.
   I... can't fight her... he thought, but leaped into the fray.

>Searingflame<

71 comments:

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar growled, Duskgaze was already weak, he leapt onto Frostriver bowling her off Duskgaze, maybe he could get through to her...

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Thistlepaw yelped fighting an apprnetice, she managed to pin him down "Let me out!" he squeaked.
"Okay I will!" she clawed his stomach and he ran out

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

Darkbreeze gulped, under strict order from Willowsun, she had said

Attack, kill if necasery, BriarClan warriors,

The only way he could not attack his clanmates was to fight it.

He leapt onto Spiritedpaw, he realized with a pang that this was his kin. Luckicly, Spiritedpaw was skilled. He twisted, biting Darkbreeze's paw, he ran, finding an apponent his size "Good job Spiritedpaw," he whispered, he leapt onto another briarclan cat,

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostriver winced, but turned around and leaped onto Copperflare, pinning him down.

>Frostriver<

Emberpaw pinned Ashpaw to the ground, nipping her scruff.

>Emberpaw<

Brass heard screeching and ran towards the Briarclan camp, and as soon as he realized what was going on he jumped onto Breezeflame's back, digging his claws in.

>Breezeflame<

Swiftstar growled as Frozenstar pinned her down, but she sunk her teeth into Frozenstar's paw.

>Swiftstar<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze soon found himself pinning down Ravensoar. Ravensoar growled. They fought, Darkbreeze wondered if Ravensoar was gettng tired... he wasn't

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Thistlepaw saw her father pinned down by Frostriver "GET OFF MY DAD TRAITOR@|!" she yowled leaping on her

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostriver tried not to fight back, but she unwillingly clawed at Thistlepaw.

>Frostriver<

Searingflame scored his claws down Archear's flank, then Archear dug his teeth into his ear.

>Searingflame<

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw bit Frostriver's leg

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

Ravensoar growled leaping away as another BrokenClan cat attacked him

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Darkbreeze pinned down Emberpaw

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Emberpaw squirmed and clawed at Darkbreeze's paws.

>Emberpaw<

Frostriver clawed Thistlepaw's tail.

>Frostriver<

Swiftstar clawed Frozenstar's flank while Frozenstar sunk her teeth into Swiftstar's leg.

>Swiftstar/Frozenstar<

Murkpaw rushed into battle, a gleaming light in her eyes.

>Murkpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit looked outside the nursery at the battle going on "Mama!! I think I see Murkkit!!" she yowled

~-Charcoalkit~-~

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw scored Frostriver's flank

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

Darkbreeze picked Emberpaw up by the scruff throwing he as short a distance as he could muster

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostriver bit Thistlepaw's ear.

>Frostriver<

Emberpaw rolled from the impact and darted underneath Darkbreeze, unbalancing him.

>Emberpaw<

Murkpaw prepared to leap onto a Briarclan cat but something held her back.

>Murkpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Murkkit! Over here! I knew you'd come back!!" Charcoalkit purred

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

Darkbreeze smiled falling, but to his dismay he gotup again ramming into Emberpaw

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Thistlepaw growled slamming both her paws into Frostriver's face, claws unsheathed

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostriver jerked back, spitting up a mouthful of blood but sunk her claws into Thistlepaw's just, bringing her down.

>Frostriver<

Murkpaws eyes widened, but she stayed where she was, then her gaze turned cold.

>Murkpaw<

Emberpaw was sent flying but caught onto a low branch with her paws and sprung off it, landing on Darkbreeze digging her claws in his back.

>Emberpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze got up on his hind paws shaking her off

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

"Come on Murkkit!! Over here!" Charcoalkit shouted

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

Thistlepaw growled but could not get up. She closed her eyes, preparing to be killed.

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Emberpaw fell off, still clinging to him upsidedown, digging her claws in.

>Emberpaw<

Murkpaw shook her head, dissapearing into the crowd.

>Murkpaw<

Frostriver was about to deal the death blow but winced, fighting the mind control and got off of Thistlepaw.

>Frostriver<

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw began to shake, still not able to get up

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

Charcoalkit sighed "Fine! BUT YOUR NOT MY SISTER ANYMORE!" she yowled

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

Darkbreeze was about go on his back, smothering her but he bagan to fight it. He took her by the scruff and set her down "Get. Out. Of. Here. Now," he said through clenched teeth, "Can't. Fight much. Longer, Don't. Want. To. Hurt. Clanmates!"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

MadiShae said...

*Hazeltail tackled a black tom and bit into his ear.*

Hazeltail

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Emberpaw scampered to the other side of the crowd in confusion.

>Emberpaw<

Frostriver found herself unsheathing her claws but dug them in the ground. In a mixture of growls she managed to make out.

"Are... you... ok?"

>Frostriver<

Burntpaw leaped onto Twistingpaw, growling.

>Burntpaw<

Ashpaw found Emberpaw again, ramming into her.

>Emberpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I... can't get up," Thistlepaw gasped in pain, struggling in vain to get up

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

Darkbreeze crouched, closing his eyes. He fought against Willowsun, trying to break free

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Spiritedpaw ran to help his sister (Emberpaw)

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Ashpaw's eyes darted to side to side. She'd have to take on both apprentices at once. She cuffed them both around the ears.

>Ashpaw<

Frostriver tried to prop her up.

>Frostriver<

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw gapsed "Thank-you," she stumbled to the medicine cat den, collapsing when she was inside

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

Spiritedpaw growled clawing her tail

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart shook his head before charging into the massive clump of battling cats. He wasn't exactly sure who to attack at the moment.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Ashpaw tried to tug her tail back. Emberpaw dug her claws into Ashpaw's neck.

>Ashpaw<

Frostriver just stared into space. The pain was overwhelming.

>Frostriver<

Raggednight leaped onto Duskgaze, digging her claws in her spine.

>Raggednight<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar growled throwing a BrokenClan warrior aside

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Darkbreeze doubled over in pain "Fight it," he muttered to himselft

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkpaws eyes flashed as she looked at her father from across the clearing, but leaped into the mass of cats.

>Murkpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar suddenly scented a familier scent "MURKPAW!" he growled. She was what? four moons? Why was she in this battle?"

~-Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkpaw halted to a stop, lookign at him.

"What?"

>Murkpaw<

Brass was flipped over but he clawed at Breezeflame with his hind legs.

>Brass<

Swiftstar struck her claws down onto Frozenstar's neck, spraying blood.

>swiftstar<

✠Ember✠ said...

"What are you doing in this battle Murkpaw, you're still a kit, you're still my kit,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I'm an apprentice." she said scornfully. "I'm here to fight."

>Murkpaw<

Frozenstar leaped up, cornering Swiftstar in her den.

>Frozenstar<

Frostriver suddenly was moved towards Searingflame, and she glared at Willowsun with hatred.

>Frostriver<

✠Ember✠ said...

Willowsun smiled sweetly

~-~Willowsun~-~

Dustymist cried out in pain as a claw cut across her throat, she tumbled to the ground her eyes beggining to glaze, blood pooling around her "Ravenstar?" she croaked

~-~Dustymist~-~

Darkbreeze hissed leaping on Frostymoon still atempting to fight it, everything was a haze around him

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Duskgaze bit Raggednight fiercely and the Brokenclan cat went off and leaped on Nimbleheart. Duskgaze saw Dustymist and ran over to her.

"Mother!" she exclaimed.

>Duskgaze<

Murkpaw tried to leap into the fight reluctantly, but it felt like stone chains were tying her to the ground.

>Murkpaw<

Ashpaw flipped her over and landed a hard blow on Spirtedpaw's muzzle.

>Ashpaw<

Searingflame looked to see some cat barreling him over, and he dug his claws into it's pelt, then stopped dead. It was Frostriver.

>Frostriver<

✠Ember✠ said...

Dustymist looked at her daughter "Duskgaze... so proud... you... great warriors, I knew you'd be," she coughed blood spattering the ground

~-~Dustymist~-~

"MOM!" Ravensoar yowled rushing over to his mother "Is she still alive?" he asked Duskgaze urgently

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yes." she said, getting some cobwebs after a few heartbeats and pressing them on Dustymist's wounds.

"Your going to be okay." Duskgaze told her mother.

>Duskgaze<

Breezeflame walked up to Murkpaw.

"Why aren't you fighting!?" he snarled. Murkpaw flinched.

"I c-can't." she mumbled.

"Then your weak!" he said, slashing her face with his claws.

>Breezeflame<

Frostriver stopped dead, doubling over in pain.

Searingflame stared at her in dismay, wondering if he should come any closer.

>Searingflame<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar flicked his ears in Murkpaw and Breezeflame's Direction then at his mother, "I'm sorry, I have to protect her," he whispered "I love you," then he ran to Breezeflame "Stay away from my daughter!" he growled rammng into him

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Darkbreeze heard Duskgaze and Ravensoar, he leapt off Frostymoon fighting it. He ran to his mother "Mom!" he cried

~-~Dakrbreeze~-~

Dustymist smiled and gulped "Duskgaze, too late... I love you." she turned to Darkbreeze "You... are strong, stronger than her... work... fight... I belive... in you" she coughed. She smiled at her kits then her eyes glazed over completly "Good-bye," she whispered. Her flanks rose one more then stopped

~-~Dustymist~-~

Darkbreeze buried his nose in his mother's fur "NO!"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Mother." She whimpered.

>Duskgaze<

Breezeflame side-rolled, clawing Ravensoar's flank.

>Breezeflame<

Murkpaw stood there, frozen.

>Murkpaw<

Frostriver crumpled to the ground in pain, not moving an inch towards Searingflame.

>Frostriver<

Swiftstar rammed into Frozenstar out of her den, bring her claws down over and over to Frozenstar's exposed belly.

>Frozenstar<

Briarberry pinned down Willowsun, snarling in rage.

>Briarberry<

✠Ember✠ said...

Willowsun laughed digging her claws into Briarberry's paws

~-~Willowsun~-~

Darkbreeze felt tears roll down his cheeks "No," he whimpered feeling like a kit

~-~Darkbreeze~~

Willowsun felt herself loosing control of Darkbreeze, she desperatly tried to hold on to his will, but Briarberry was weakening her

~-~Willowsun~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Briarberry slashed her claws over Willowsun's neck.

>Briarberry<

Duskgaze looked around.

Who killed my mother? I'm gonna kill them.

>Duskgaze<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze sighed "Duskgaze," he mewed, fiding it easier to gain cotrol "I'm so sorry..."

~-~Darkbreeze~-~


Ravensoar bit Breezeflame's ear

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Willowsun smiled "I killed that useless she-cat now I'll kill YOU," she laughed insanely biting into Briarberry's neck

~-~Willowsun~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"It's okay." Duskgaze.

>Duskgaze<

Breezeflame flicked his claws across Ravensoar's nose.

>Breezeflame<

Briarberry's eyes widened as blood spilled out of her neck, and she stared sightlessly at the sky.

>briarberry<

✠Ember✠ said...

Willowsun smiled in triumps

~-~Willowsun~-~

"I didn't know what I was doing, I think I might be back now," he purred

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

Ravensoar claws raked across his cheek

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Ok." Duskgaze said, pinpointing the cat who killed Dustymist and leaped onto it, claws extended.

>Duskgaze<

Swiftstar growled, and watched in dismay that Briarberry was dead.

"No..." Swiftstar said.

>swiftstar<

Breezeflame aimed a blow to the back of Ravensoar's head.

>Breezeflame<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar ducked whipping around and hitting the side of Breezeflame's head with his paws

~-~Ravensoar~-~

savortheflavor said...

(Redo.The first one wasn't saved or something.)

Nimbleheart let out a surprised screech.He turned his head and shook to try and shake Raggednight off.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Swiftstar rammed into Willowsun, knocking her backwards, but turned around, looking at Briarberry.

>Swiftstar<

Breezeflame leaped over Ravensoar and landed on Murkpaw, pinning her down and digging her claws into Murkpaw's legs.

>Breezeflame<

Searingflame helped Frostriver up.

"I'm so sorry." Frostriver murmured.

>Frostriver<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze smiled. He was almost free!!

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Raggednight held on.

>Raggednight<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze saw Nimbleheart struggling with BrokenCLan cat on his back. He ran over to help, after a little bit of resisting he made it over tugging Raggednight off Nimbleheart

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

MadiShae said...

*He twisted under Burntpaw's grip and flipped onto his back, having him pinned down, then rolled over to sink his teeth into Burntpaw's neck and his teeth the apprentice's shoulder.*

Twistingpaw

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart quickly looked around.He stepped back towards the edge of the camp and reared back and rammed into a tree,as an another attempt to take Raggednight off.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Burntpaw reached his paws back to Twistingpaw's head, sinking his claws into his face.

>Burntpaw<

Raggednight stumbled up again, and tripped Nimbleheart.

>Raggednight<

Swiftstar looked around sadly and raised her voice.

"I say these words, before the body of Briarberry, so that her spirit may approve of my choice!" Swiftstar yowled.

"Searingflame will be the new deputy of Briarclan!" She said.

>Swiftstar<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze looked up and growled, he saw Willowsun. Then he looked at Blossompatch and Frostriver "Her strength is fading!" he yowled "Fight back!"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostriver trembled against her shoulder but gasped. She felt lighter.

Searingflame let her lean against him.

>Searingflame<

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart,after regaining balance,batted a paw at Raggednight with unsheathed claws.

~Nimbleheart

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze smiled feeling all control lift. "Finally," he whispered, he saw a blur of color than sank into conforting blackness

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Raggednight gave Nimbleheart a hard blow to his head.

>Raggednight<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkpaw didn't know what to do. She looked around confused.

What side am I on?

>Murkpaw<

Emberpaw had Ashpaw pinned down, and Ashpaw's eyes began to glaze over.

>Emberpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar pinned down Breezeflame "Murkpaw, I know you hate me, but please go to the nursery with your mother and sister, please, I don't want to loose you,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Spiritedpaw looked at Ashpaw, poking her with his claw "Is she dead?"

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Almost" Emberpaw said.

>Emberpaw<

Murkpaw hesitated, but went into the nursery pressing her nose against Floe's fur.

>Murkpaw<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Breezeflame kicked up and sent Ravensoar flying off him.

>Ravensoar<

Swiftstar matched blow after blow with Frozenstar, thinking about her kits.

Willowsun and Breezeflame and Frostriver..... why did they have to turn evil? she thought, hoping out of Frozenstar's path as she tried to leap on her.

And Darkbreeze.. and Blossompatch... she thought, wincing as Frozenstar delivered a blow to her muzzle.

Swiftstar looked around and realized she was trapped in her den again.

>Swiftstar<

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart let out a frustrated hiss. He flattened his ears to lessen the chance of them being shredded and he came onto Raggednight's left and bit into his back.

~Nimbleheart

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar landed dazed, but he leapt back on Breezeflame

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Charcoalkit licked her sister's ear "Murkpaw!!! I missed you so much! SO MUCH!!"!

~_~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkpaw looked at the ground sadly.

>Murkpaw<

"c'mon, let's get her somewhere safe." emberpaw mumbled, and began dragging Ashpaw's body out of the clearing.

>Emberpaw<

Raggednight winced but she clawed him back.

>Raggednight<

✠Ember✠ said...

Spiritedpaw's eyes widened "W-we killed her?"

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"She's barely alive, she might make it." Emberpaw growled. "She's our kin."

>Emberpaw<

savortheflavor said...

(Oops she)

Nimbleheart slightly flinched from Raggednight.

~Nimbleheart

✠Ember✠ said...

Spiritedpaw pressed cobwebs to her wounds "Oh StarClan I hope we didn't kill her,"

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

Darkbreeze stirred slightly "Huh?"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Blossompatch grinned as the mind control lifted. She smiled, and leaped into the air, and landed on a BrokenClan cat.

<>*Blossompatch*<>

Lilyfrost came out of her den to see one body. She pelted out of the den and stopped abruptly beside Dustymist. She could smell the scent of death and she stroked her tail down Dustymist's cooling pelt.

"May StarClan light your path. Good luck." Lilyfrost whispered before walking away.

<>*Lilyfrost*<>

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Raggednight prepared to leap again, her eyes narrowed in concentration.

>Raggednight<

Ashpaw's eyes fluttered open.

"I'm still alive?" she said in astonishment.

>Ashpaw<

Frostriver flexed her claws. She was battle-ready again. She leaped Breezeflame, carrying him off Ravensoar and she raised her paw to deal the death blow.

>Frostriver<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkbreeze blinked a few times getting to his paws "Whats going on?" he asked "The mind control is gone right?"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

✠Ember✠ said...
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✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar nodded "Thank-you Frostriver," he rushed over to his mother's side "I love you, Say hi to dad for me," he half smiled efore going into the nursery "Floe? Murkpaw? Charcoalkit?"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Spiritedpaw nodded "Yea..."

~-~Apiritedpaw~-~

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart's eyes quickly skimmed throughout the faces of cats.His eyes flickered back to Raggednight.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Ashpaw narrowed her eyes.

"Why?"

>Ashpaw<

Raggednight smiled and leaped on Nimbleheart.

>Raggednight<

Murkpaw's eyes glimmered with shame and she looked at her paws.

>Murkpaw<

"Yeah, we're here." Floe said.

>Floe<