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"And when they're running for the hills, let them spread the word. Briarclan is too be feared!" He said, and again, the clan roared it's approval. Starclan, it seems, had made their choice."

whos.amung.us

Friday, August 20, 2010

Coming to be

   Swiftstar looked at the battle, horror in her eyes. Briarclan was losing! She remembered the prophecy that haunted her dreams for moons.

"you have two choices
only one you can cover
one leads to death
and death the other
the obstacles
you cannot pass
live each day
like it's your last"

 It sent shivers down her pelt.  What did it even mean? Why had it been Greystar, the former Brokenclan leader, give it to her? All she knew was something was going to happen, very soon. She lept onto a brokenclan cat, digging her claws into it's spine, making it screech. After it fled, she looked to see how her clan-mates were doing. All of them were fighting, elders and queens included, already having bloody wounds that they will carry with them for moons. This battle would be remembered for seasons to come. They were outnumbered, after Frozenstar had taken over Brokenclan and made double in size from the rouges. Swiftstar recognized some of them. And they had cats with powers on their side.
    But Brairclan had some, too. She looked at some of the clan-mates she loved the most. Thunderspirit, who was fighting with the courage of Lionclan. Brass who would give his life to the clan he just met. Duskgaze, who was taking two warriors head on. Why had her oldest son join Frozenstar's ranks? Along with some others who were in the prophecy? She didn't know. At this rate, death will surely come for everyone. Willowsun and Frostriver were after that. All my kits are either dead or turned against me. she thought sadly. Or both.
      She thought she wouldn't let any cats betray her again after Frozenstar and Hawkeyes by keeping a close eye on them, but they slipped away from her as if she was blind. At least they had kept Floe, Copperflare, and Searingflarme, Frozenstar's kit was fighting on Briarclan's side. She had just appointed him deputy, after Briarberry died earlier in the battle. She knew that he would be loyal.
   Claws raked her side, and she turned to see the cat none other than Frozenstar. Hissing, Swiftstar swept her legs from under her, sending her crashing to the ground. Her grey and white fur was stained with Briarclan's blood and she was going to pay. Pay for killing Briarberry and Brownspots too.For all the deaths that had come by this battle taking place. Swiftstar slashed out with her claws in rage, sending blood spilling from her face. The grey and white she-cat shook it off. Nine lives against my one. Frozenstar got up then leaped on her, the Black she-cat's legs buckled. Frozenstar was bigger than her, and her fur was choking her. She rolled Swiftstar around, pinning her down. She hissed in her ear.
   "I'll give you a choice here, Swiftstar." she began. "You can either let me kill you, and Brokenclan will leave. Or we'll just kill all your clanmates." she chuckled at this. "It's your choice, you can either choose death, or death." Frozenstar said, and then Swiftstar understood. She would make a choice, than leads to death of her clanmates, or she would die for them to live. She could never pass this obstacle, it was coming all along. Today was her last.
  "Kill me." Swiftstar said. "Just leave my clan-mates alone." she hissed. Frozenstar raised one paw. "Very well." she said. "Even I know it's your last life." were the last words Swiftstar heard then claws pierced her throat, and the leader of Briarclan stepped into Starclan.

>Swiftstar<

Frozenstar looked back at the cats.  "We have won!" she exclaimed to the cats of BrokenClan.

"Back to the camp!" she said, and all the Brokenclan cats seemed to melt back into the shadows leaving the BriarClan cats alone.

>Frozenstar<

88 comments:

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar heard BrokenClan lead, what was going on?

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Darkbreeze growled "No! You did not win!" he called after them

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Brass wailed, running up to Swiftstar and pressing nose into her cold fur.

>Brass<

Bronzekit padded into the clearing.

"What's going on?" he asked, confused.

>Bronzekit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar's eyes widened as realization washed over him "No... No!" he screeched tears falling from his sightless eyes

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Charcoalkit looked at Murkpaw "You okay?" she asked her voice shaky

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

Darkbreeze swallowed hard

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

"NO!" Thistlepaw cried

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

Frostymoon gulped tears falling down her cheeks

~-~Frostymoon~-~

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart's head jerked in the direction everyone was looking.Swiftstar was lying motionless. She's dead...Then again its not like I haven't seen out leader die before ,he thought.He had to recognize that he was among the many cats who respected her,therefore getting over this death may not be easy for the clan.Nimbleheart looked up at the sky.

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostriver broke away from Searingflame and rushed toward Swiftstar's body, lying down next to Brass, not even bothering to ask who he was.

>Frostriver<

Breezeflame's eyes glinted with uncertainty as he backed away out of camp.

>Breezeflame<

Duskgaze still sat by her mother, but the grief weighted her even more.

>Duskgaze<

Emberpaw sat next to Ashpaw, who was too wounded to go anywhere, her eyes gleaming with sorrow.

>Emberpaw<

Burntpaw stared in disbelief.

>Burntpaw<

Searingflame watched after Frostriver, looking down at the ground, relization hit him.

I'm leader now...

>Searingflame<

"I'm a traitor." Murkpaw mumbled.

>Murkpaw<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Yellowspots sat next to Nimbleheart.

"She was a great leader."

>Yellowspots<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit shook her head "No, you were confused,"

~-~Charcoalkti~-~

savortheflavor said...

Nimbleheart nodded."There's no doubt about that.I bet its very hard to find a cat that noble these days."

~Nimbleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkpaw looked at her doubtfully.

>Murkpaw<

Yellowspots nodded in agreement.

"I hope she choose her new deputy well." he said, glancing at Searingflame.

>Yellowspots<

savortheflavor said...

"It would be such a waste for it to be ruined after such a great ruling."Nimbleheart said turning his head to see Yellowspots.

~Nimbleheart

☪Dream said...

*Turnpaw yowled, and her mind shot to Frozenstar. She took a step back from the cat she was fighting. She winced as the cat dug it's claws into her face. She fled to the side of the clearing, panting.*

Swiftstar's dead... Frozenstar killed her...

:~~Turnpaw:

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit sighed "Well, you're here now, your not a traitor anymore, and from what I saw, you never attacked a BriarClan cat,"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I guess..." Murkpaw said. Floe licked them both on the head.

"I'm just glad you two are safe." Floe said.

>Floe<

An orange cat picked his way into the clearing, a confused expression on his face.

"What happened here?" he asked.

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar sighed "A battle,"

~-Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

The tom squinted his eyes.

"Ravenkit? is that you? Of course, you'd be a warrior now." he muttered.

>Tom<

Murkpaw sighed, walking out of the den and looking around.

>Murkpaw<

Brass looked up at the sky.

>Brass<

Bronzekit turned to Charcoalkit.

"Why's everyone sad?" he asked, still confused.

>Bronzekit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar nodded "Ya, Ravensoar... who are you?"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Charcoalkit sighed "Swiftstar is dead,"

~-~Charcoalkti~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Heatpaw." Heatpaw said. He wrinkled his nose. "Brokenclan. You won, yes?"

>Heatpaw<

"Naw-aw!" Bronzekit exclaimed.

>Bronzekit<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar looked down "I guess... wiftstar is dead,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

"You want to see her body?" Charcoalkit snapped

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Tear's began to run down Bronzekit's face and he just glared at Charcoalkit, running out of the den.

>Bronzekit<

Heatpaw's eyes clouded. "I'm sorry." he said.

>Heatpaw<

Searingflame looked up at the sky. He wondered who he would choose as deputy.

>Searingflame<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar sighed "So where have you been?"

~-Ravensoar~-~

Charcoalkit sighed "I'M SORRY," she called

~-~CHarcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Me.. and a bunch of clans were called together for this prophecy.... but I guess it wasn't ready for us though." Heatpaw said, sighing.

>Heatpaw<

Bronzekit ran up next the Brass, pushing his nose into Swiftstar's fur.

>Bronzekit<

Shadeshadow sighed.

Maybe I should've told them this was going to happen.

>Shadeshadow<

MadiShae said...

*He stopped fighting to look up, bewildered.*

Swiftstar! NOOOOOO!!

*He rushed up to his mate and instantly began crying, full of grief. Then, turned to the kit he thought was his son.*

Bronzekit, please .. tell me she still has one more life. that she's not dead.

-Thunderspirit

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar siged "Oh,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I-I don't know." Bronzekit said in Bewilderment.

>Bronzekit<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"So i'm guessing a lot has happened when I was gone." he said, looking the younger cat over.

"How's Frozenpaw?" he asked.

>Heatpaw<

MadiShae said...

*He ruffled his son's bronze colored fur and licked him between the ears.*

I-It will be .. okay.

*He winced at lying to his son and broke down again.*

-Thunderspirit

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar spat "Oh you mean Frozenstar? She killed Swiftstar,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

✠Ember✠ said...

(He still has Frostriver and Shadeshadow!!)

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

(*puts hands over ears* LALALALALALALALA!)

(he can find someone else gosh!)

MadiShae said...

(Okay, maybe Shadeshadow, but he hardly knows her! She was missing half her life.)

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Frozenstar?" Heatpaw exclaimed.

"But she couldn't...."

>Heatpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

(Frostriver isn't evil!!)

"Wanna go ask her? Go to BrokenClan,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Heatpaw looked sharply away.

"Fine. I believe you. It doesn't mean I want to, though." he said, sighing.

>Heatpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar sighed "She left because you were gone, she thought they didn't turst you. So she left and hated BrirClan... or at least thats what I can understand from her thoughts,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Her thoughts?!?!?"

>Heatpaw<

MadiShae said...

*He lifted his head slowly from Swiftstar's cold body and glanced at Brass, almost growling.*

Who are you?

-Thunderspirit

✠Ember✠ said...

"Uh- ya, I can read minds..."

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Brass didn't look away from the sky.

"Brass." he said.

>Brass<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"You can?" Heatpaw said, then shrugged. "Cool." he added.

>Heatpaw<

MadiShae said...

What are you doing here?

*He growled, stepping in front on Bronzekit protectivly.*

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"To sit vigil for Swiftstar." Brass said matter-o-factly.

>Brass<

MadiShae said...

But why? How do you know her? You aren't a part of BriarClan.

*He glared at the tom.*

-Thunderspirit

✠Ember✠ said...

"Ya, I gues..."

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Brass glared back at Thunderspirit.

"Because she loved me, too."

>Brass<

MadiShae said...

*He arched his back and hissed.*

What are you talking about? She loved me. You shouldn't even be allowed here.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Brass glanced at Bronzekit. "That's my kit." he said calmly.

>Brass<

MadiShae said...

*He snorted.*

You must be a very cofused cat. That's my kit, my mate, not yours!

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Well, that's your opinion." Brass said in a level tone.

>Brass<

MadiShae said...

*He almost laughed.*

My opinion? Seriously, I think you have bees in your brain, because you can ask anyone. This is my kit.

*He layed his tail on Bronzekit's shoulders and bent down to whisper something into his ear.*

Don't listen to the crazy old cat. Okay?

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"If that's what you think." Brass said, rolling his eyes.

>Brass<

MadiShae said...

*He glared at the cat and wanted to sink his claws into Brass's face.*

What is that cat thinking!? he thought. Trying to steal my kit and mate. What a liar!

Come on, Bronzekit, why don't we go into the nurs - or never mind. Why don't you get some rest.

*He currled around his so-called son.*

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Bronzekit nodded, but looked confused.

>Bronzekit<

Brass continued to stare up the at the sky.

I'm sorry Swiftstar. I know you'd always want us to get along. I'll always try and make you happy, even in starclan. he thought. Like a true mate.

>Brass<

MadiShae said...

*He layed close to Bronzekit and soon fell asleep, dreaming of Swiftstar.*

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Heatpaw sighed, looking around.

"Well, I guess I can help." Heatpaw said, looking at the debris of the dens that the battling cats knocked down.

>Heatpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar nodded "I guess you can,"

~-Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe came out of the den, looking around and she spotted Heatpaw. She rushed over to him.

"Heatpaw? Is that you?" she asked.

"Poppypaw!" he exclaimed after a few heartbeats.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar smiled "Her names Floe now, Floe, do you want him to meet the kits?"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Your... mates?" he asked, looking at Floe and Ravensoar, who nodded.

"That's wonderful!"

>Heatpaw<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe nodded.

"Ok." she said, vanishing into the den.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar nodded "We have two beautiful kits too, Charcoalkit! Murkpaw!?"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

✠Ember✠ said...

"We have someone who wants to meet you!?"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkpaw came out, followed by her sister.

>Murkpaw<

Heatpaw looked confused.

"Murkpaw?" he said, looking at her. She looked too young to ba an apprentice.

>Heatpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Um... ya, Charcoalkit and Murkpaw are littermates, but Murkpaw went to BrokenClan they made her an apprentice, but she's back here now,"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

"Mommy whos this?"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Heatpaw nodded in understanding.

So she came back. Good.

>Heatpaw<

"This is Heatpaw, you... uncle." Floe said.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Yes it is good," Ravensoar agreed

~-~Ravensoar~-~

"So like Darkbreeze?"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Hi!" Murkpaw said to him. "Your an apprentice?" she asked in awe. He looked older than Ravensoar!

>Murkpaw<

Heatpaw hesitated, but nodded.

>Heatpaw<

Floe nodded.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit tilted her head "Did your warrior ceremony get delayed?"

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No I was.... gone. For a long time." He said.

>Heatpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Charcoalkit narrowed her eyes "Oh..."

~-~Charcoalkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yup." Heatpaw said.

>Heatpaw<

Searingflame looked up at the sky."I have to go now." he murmured to Frostriver. Then he walked over to Ravensoar.

"I'm leaving to go to the moon-stream now." he said. "Your in charge of the clan when I'm gone." he said.

>Searingflame<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar nodded "Alright Searingflame."

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Searingflame nodded back, and echanged a glance with Lilyfrost, heading off.

>Searingflame<

Ashpaw was sitting there, wondering what to do. She couldn't go back to Brokenclan now, they'd think she was a traitor and kill her.

I should go over there. I'm no coward. she thought boldly, standing up.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Spiritedpaw opened one eye "Where are you going?"

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Shouldn't I go back?" Ashpaw asked.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"To BrokenClan?! They'll kill you!" Spiritedpaw mewed

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"So? I'm no coward." Ashpaw said.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Well there is a fine line between bravery and stupidity,"

~-~Spritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"What do you mean?" Ashpaw asked.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Like, you can fight BrokenClan, but bursting into their camp with no one else still recovering from battle wounds is stupid,"

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Well, I don't think I can stay here." Ashpaw said.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Spiritedpaw blinked "Why? You have kin here! Me, emberpaw, Thistlepaw, Burntpaw, Murkpaw and Charcoalkit, practically half the clan!"

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I attacked you." she said, her voice almost cracking.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"So? You were born in BrokenClan it was natural what your clan ad taught you to do, now you know better,"

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yeah, I guess." Ashpaw said.

Maybe I could live as a rouge, some place real far away from Brokenclan. she thought.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Spiritedpaw sighed resting his head on his paws

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Then what do I do know?" Ashpaw asked him.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I don't know," Spiritedpaw sighed "Ya know It might sound crazy but sometimes I think life would be so much easier if I weren't in a clan, hunting for myself and only myself, no more fighting..."

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"You get to wake up whenever you want.." she said, laughing.

>Ashpaw<