Anyone Still here can join. Will start trying to make posts soon. XD

"And when they're running for the hills, let them spread the word. Briarclan is too be feared!" He said, and again, the clan roared it's approval. Starclan, it seems, had made their choice."

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Friday, September 11, 2009

Swiftstar padded out of camp. Looking at the trees, she missed the tall pines, the shadow at every corner, easily concealing you. She missed Shadowclan. She walked through her territory, for the longest time.

Maybe it wouldn't hurt for a visit.

She stalked towards the direction of the camp. But suddenly, behind her in the bushes she heard rustling, and whispers, and then, she smelled a familiar smell.

"Ravenkit, Hawkkit and Brairkit! Come out of the bushes right now!" Then, the three kits come out form there hiding places, with guilty looks on their faces. "What are you doing out here?! You know kits can't come out of the camp alone! We've been smelling large groups of cats lately, and we don't know who, you could've been killed!"

Suddenly, five full-grown cats leaped out of the bushes, claws unsheathed.

"Who are you? This is Briarclan's territory, so I suggest you should leave!"

Ine if the cats spoke. "This is our territory now. We are Brokenclan, and I am their deputy, Smokeblaze. And we will fight for this land!" They steped forward.

Oh no! It's just me and my kits! What are we going to do?!? Wait! What am I going to do?!?

Then, somehow Briarkit, Hawkkit, and Ravenkit began to glow, almost blinding all the other cats.

"What's happening, mommy?!?" cried Ravenkit

"I feel funny in side! In a wierd way!" mewed Briarkit

Suddenly they began to grow, untill they were well muscled, full-grown cats, eyes darting around.

The prophecy, then she remembered the prophecy

"Three will come. With the shadow of a raven, the sight of a hawk, and the strength of the briar, a most powerfull force . These three will help your clan......"

This all seemed to happen in a second, then the cats leaped on us. Briarkit slashed one cat in the neck instinctively, and he feel to the ground, limp and lifeless.

They have powers, that no cat have ever seen......

And then they battled.

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Heartbeats later, the battling stoped, and her three kit were kit again, and there were five motionless bodies lying on the ground. We did it, but they will come back soon.

"What happened mommy?"

"I don't remember anything"

"It's okay kits, we were just heading home."

And so.... they headed home.

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Will all cats old enough to catch there own prey join here beneath the Thickbranch for a clan meeting!

Briarkit, Hawkkit, and Ravenkit step forward! From this moment on untill you recieve your warrior names, you will be known as Hawkpaw, Briarpaw and Ravenpaw!

Gazestripe! You did well with Stonefeather, I expect you will pass down all you know to young Brairpaw!

Iceleaf! You are a worthy warrior, you will mentor Hawkpaw! Teach him your skills and Quick witts!

Shadefrost! You are ready for your first apprentice, you will mentor Ravenpaw! Teaach him your loyalty and patience!

Briarpaw! Hawkpaw! Ravenpaw!

The clan cheered thier names, luoder and louder.

I know they will make great warriors.

-Swiftstar

10 comments:

☠♥Maddie♥☠ said...

Yay thanks for letting me mentor one of your kits

mistypaw said...

Swiftstar! Sparkleshine is my mentor!

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

oh! Yeah!

[Lauren] said...

Hey!

[Lauren] said...

what??? i said hey not like yelling i mean like saying hi

[Lauren] said...

and omg i love the new header! check out the whole new look!

Kayla said...

congrats!!!Briarpaw!Hawkpaw!Ravenpaw!(that was a cool story btw swiftstar)
~Sparkleshine

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