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"And when they're running for the hills, let them spread the word. Briarclan is too be feared!" He said, and again, the clan roared it's approval. Starclan, it seems, had made their choice."

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Thursday, July 15, 2010

Kits of a Leader Part 4- Frostpaw

        Frostpaw stepped into the open, from the concealed fronds. The three brokenclan cats pinning Stormwater down looked up in astonishment, and so did Flameblaze, the Brokenclan deputy.
   "G-g-greystar!" Flameblaze stammered, utterly shocked. Frostpaw tried not to smile. So I disguised myself as the leader of Brokenclan. she thought. Good choice.
    She looked at who Flameblaze was pinning down. Frozenheart. She almost spat with disgust. Frostpaw was about to continue the charade when Flameblaze interrupted her.
  "But your dead." he said. "You can't be alive! You died of greencough." he said, then stared for a few heart beats longer. "Impossible." he spat. "You must be a look-a-like" he growled, and looked Frostpaw straight in the eye. "We'll deal with you, later." he said. "As for you." he said, digging his claws into Frozenheart deeper. "Your coming with us." he said. Frostpaw made no move to stop them. Frozenheart deserved this. She hoped whatever punishments they give out in Brokenclan were worse than this.
  "B-but Flameblaze!" One of the brokenclan cats holding Stormwater down stuttered. "We are following Flickstar's orders." Flameblaze snapped at the cat, now Frostpaw recognized him as Lizardclaw. Frostpaw just dipped her head, and narrowed her eyes. How could I made such a stupid mistake! I should've changed into the deputy, Flicktalon.  Flickstar now.
  "Go ahead and take her." she spat back, not caring if she's in charge or not. Flameblaze shot her a glare, but said nothing. He shuffled Frozenheart along, who didn't seem to struggle. Was this what she wanted all along? Did she forget how harsh, unforgiving, and evil the Brokenclan cats are? Just like herself. She shot a pain-filled glance at Stormwater, but the three guards let go of Stormwater, who was trying to shake from their grasp. They quickly followed behind Flameblaze, with Lizardclaw being the last and glaring at them a heartbeat longer but then disappearing. All five of them running in a tight circle around Frozenheart.
  Frostpaw wondered, what now? She didn't look like herself, yet she couldn't change, not in front of Stormwater. She could tell Darkpaw was watching this scene, and came out of the bushes.
   "I saw the whole thing." Darkpaw said, looking at the Briarclan deputy and then at Frostpaw. "Who are you?" he asked her, obviously trying to keep up the act. She looked between them quickly. "A loner." she rumbled and the took off, running through the trees. As soon as she was out of sight of them , she transformed into herself and ran back, panting as if she ran because of the danger.
  "What's going on?" she asked Darkpaw and Stormwater. "I scented Brokenclan scent." she breathed, and  they told her what had just happened.

(sorry madi and Em, but it fit with the story so i kinda used your cats.)

57 comments:

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw blinked "Do you think even Frozenheart deserves to be captured by BrokenClan?"

~-~Darkpaw~-~

Ravenpaw smiled

I'm happier than i have been, for, a long time, everythings been so... weird with dad dying and this prophecy...

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe smiled back. "What are you thinking?" she asked.

>Floe<

"I think so." Frostpaw growled.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"That I'm happier with you than i have ever been," Ravenpaw smiled. He felt guilty hiding the secret from her. He didn't want to keep any secrets from her

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

Darkpaw sighed narrowing his eyes "I guess..."

~-~Darkpaw~-~

MadiShae said...

He glared at the younger cats. "How could you guys say that!" he snarled. "Frozenheart's your clanmate!"

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Why, do you feel sorry for her?" she almost spat. "She's nothing more than mangy peice of fox dung if i ever saw one." she added angrily.

>Frostpaw<

Floe looked at the emotions that flashed across Ravenpaw's face. "Is something bothering you?" she asked.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw growled "SHE killed Brownspots!"

~-!Darkpaw~-~

Ravenpaw sighed her his face creased with indesision

If i can't trust her than who can i trust

"Ya, it's been bothering me for a while now,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

MadiShae said...

"Because I know true respect!" he said getting up in her face. "Maybe you're not fit to be a warrior. True warriors can forgive."

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw wasn't fazed. "She should've been exiled, not taken prisoner. But maybe even that's too good with her." she said.

"And I show justice." she growled.

>Frostpaw<

MadiShae said...

"So what, she left to join BrokenClan, but she came back. Cats can change and killing Brownspots changed her, realizing how much bad shhe's done. And Brownspots was my aunt. She told me she was going to die soon, anyway. That StarClan was calling. And I will not be told off by an apprentice," he spat.

-Stormwater

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw took a step forward. "We are better fit to be warriors than you, she only died a few days ago, and you are already telling us to move on?"

~-~Darkpaw~-~

MadiShae said...

"Move on!" he roared. "She treated me like her own son when my mother died. I will NEVER get over her!"

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Once evil, always evil." she spat back.

>Frozenheart<

✠Ember✠ said...

"THEN WHY ARE YOU TELLING US TO FORGIVE FROZENHEART WHEN SHE DID THAT?!" Darkpaw growled

~-~Darkpaw~-~

MadiShae said...

"Watch your mat," he growled and stalked back to camp.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

omg Frostpaw i mean not frozenheart!

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw held back a snarl and watched as he ran back to camp.

>Frostpaw<

"Oh?" Floe asked.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw nodded "Me and a few other cats got some... information... a few moons ago... and it has put a lot of stress on all of us,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

Darkpaw ripped up the grass with his claws growling

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Information? About what?" she asked.

(o when frostpaw find out about this..... )

>Floe<

"What's up with him? Swiftstar told me he wanted to kill Frozenheart when they found out she killed Brownspots!" she wondered.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw shrugged

~-~Darkpaw~-~

Ravenpaw winced knowing the trouble he was getting into "A prophecy," he whispered

Frost glitters on petals willows, and webs;
The raven's wings are dark as they spread.
Dusk gives way and surrenders to light.
then blossoms again with all it's might.
Battles will turn, choices will be made
And a breeze will change thier present day


Frost is Frostpaw, Petals is Petalpaw, Willow is Willowpaw, Web is Webpaw, Raven, is me, Darkpaw is Darkpaw, Dusk is Duskpaw, Blossom is Blossompaw, Turn is Turnkit and Breeze is Breezepaw

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Whoa....." she said, awed.

>Floe<

"Maybe we should spy on them." she said, grinning. "To see exactaly what kind of torture thier putting her though." she laughed.

>Frostpaw<

MadiShae said...

He walked into camp and picked up a mouse from the fresh-kill pille and began eating it in starving gulps.

-Stormwater

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw smiled "Perfect," he purred his eyes glinting with the promise of adventure

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw nodded. "Right now?" she asked.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

(make Stormwater think something plzz)

Darkpaw nodded

~-~Darkpaw~-~

Ravenpaw nodded "And thats not it, we all have powers,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Powers? Like what kind?" she asked.

>Floe<

"Okay let's go." she smirked and starting stalking towards to border.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Like Darkpaw can't tire out in battle, and Willowpaw can control minds,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

Darkpaw purred following her, he looked at some mud "We should roll in that to cover our scent,"

~-~Darkpaw~-~

MadiShae said...

As he ate, he thought, I can't believe them. Cats can change. Heart and mind. I guess I can't blame them, I was mad at her at first. Real mad. But that's before I. . . loved her. Stormwater took another bite of his mouse. I've lost so many cats I love. I can't afford to lose Frozenheart, he thought as he stood up.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw nodded, and they poth rolled in it till they looked unrecogziable. Frostpaw wrinkled her nose.

>Frostpaw<

"What can you do?" she asked.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I can, Read minds," Ravenpaw mewed

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

Darkpaw laughed "We smell awful,"

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw nodded. "C'mon, lets go." she said, and kept on walking.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw nodded following her

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw soon spotted the Brokenclan camp, the scent almost knocked her off her paws.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw krinkled his nose 'Yuck' he mouthed

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw looked into the camp though a small hole, and nodded to indicate she had saw Frozenheart.

>Frostpaw<

(should they be captured?))

✠Ember✠ said...

(YA >:D)

"What are they doing to her?" he whispered

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

(okay might make this into a post)

"Nothing.... nothing at all she's just... sitting there." she said, shocked.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"But, I thought...."

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw drooped with dissapointment.

"Once evil, always evil like i said." then her eyes widened. "She's probably telling them all our secrets!" she hissed.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw looked scared "We have to Stop her!"

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw grinned again.

"I think Flameblaze is out of camp." she said, and suddenly a smile lit her face and she started growing ginger fur.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw smiled "I'll be a rougue you found out of camp, just call me Dark,"

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Ok." she said, after she looked like Flameblaze, and walked into camp, with Darkpaw following. Flickstar came up, his eyes narrowing.

"Who is this?" Flickstar asked seethingly.

"A rouge, Flickstar, found him in our territory." she said. Flickstar's gaze passed onto Darkpaw.

"What's your name, Rouge, and why were you on our terrirtory?" he growled at darkpaw.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw growled "My names Dark, and I was on your territory on accident, just chasing a mouse, when your friend over here caught me,"

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Ah, a mouse." Flickstar said. He looked sharply at Flameblaze. "You can go." he growled to his deputy. "I'll handle this, 'Dark' trusspasser." Flickstar said, and Frostpaw glanced at Darkpaw for a second, a look that said, 'I got a plan.' and went over to sit next to Frozenheart.

>Frostpaw<

Frozenheart watched Flameblaze come in. After they took her away to Brokenclan's camp, she was treated as a regular member. Which is worse than being held prisoner in Briarclan she thought, but then shook it away as se spotted a rouge come in after the deputy. His fur was plastered with mud but his eyes gave off nothing. Frozenheart rolled her eyes, as Flickstar came up to them, and started talking. After a few growls that she couldn't decifer, she heard Flickstar say. "I'll handle this, 'Dark' trusspasser" then Flameblaze came over to sit by her. Oddly, there was an odd grin on his face, though somehow familiar. He said.
"Can you do me a big favor?" he asked, and Frozenheart narrowed her eyes.
"That depends on what the favor is." she shot back. "Oh, one that you'd quite enjoy. And you'd probably gain something out of it." he said. It immediatley sparked her interest. She pricked her ears to listen and Flameblaze leaned in and whispered two words.
"Kill Flickstar.."

>Frozenheart<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw nodded

Oh great, well at least Flickstar's sttention is off Frozenheart, what is Frostpaw's plan?

He closed his eyes preparing to be attacked

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw smiled. Now Frozenheart would be killed by Flickstar, twhich is what she deserved. Frostpaw saw her nodd slightly, then leap right onto Flickstar's back, him yowling in suprise and the both of them wrestling on the ground.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw took a step back looking at Frostpaw

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw edged a little closer to darkpaw. "Now she won't even get a chance." she snickered to him. Flickstar's and Frozenheart's yowls brought out cats from thier dens, thier eyes sparking in interest. Flickstar had Frozenheart pinned down, and Frostpaw willed for him to just kill her already.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"How is that gonna get us out of here?" he growled "Your so caught up in trying to get Frozenheart killed, your going to kill us!"

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"How? They think I'm the deputy, and your a rouge and no one wil evem pay attention to you or even to me because of this fight. Thus covering up our problem and our spying." she whispered back. She was amused that the fact she was bigger than Darkpaw now, and almost laughed but didn't because it would be out of place in the serious situation that was happening.
Suddenly Frozenheart dug her claws into Flickstar's neck, all the way down to the tail. Blood stained the clearing, and Flickstar laid still, waking up again and he kept doing that, over and over.

>Frostpaw<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"well that explains hpw you new about..." she trailed off.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"She killed him!" Darkpaw whispered to Frostpaw "What do we do now?"

~-~Darkpaw~-~

Ravenpaw nodded, then looked over at Stromwater "I'll show you some more!" he looked into Stormwater's mind and his eyes grew wide "He-he!" he muttered

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

MadiShae said...

Stormwater finished his mouse and went out into the forest to hunt, bumping into Ravenpaw as he went. "Oh, sorry."

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"What!?!?" Floe asked.

>Floe<

Frostpaw's jaw hun open as Flickstar lay unmoving on the ground. He lost his remaining lives. Frozenheart was still alive.

"She's still alive." she muttered.

Frozenheart looked around, a challenge in her eyes. "Who will be the leader now?" one cat asked. "It must be Flameblaze, he's the deputy." another cat answered. Some cats cast glances Frostpaw's way. "But it was Frozenheart who killed him. It's her right to take her place." Lizardclaw muttered. Frostpaw glared at him, him probably mistaking it as her wanting be be leader. But really it was the fact that, Frozenheart might be the new leader. Frostpaw's plan had totally backfired.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw growled "I told you," he mewed through clenched teeth

~-~Darkpaw~-~

Ravenpaw growled at Stromwater and leaned into Floe "He loved the traitor Frozenheart!" he hissed so on;y she could hear

~-~Ravenapw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe's eyes widened. "Impossible!" Floe told him.

>Floe<

"Should we get out of here?" Frostpaw said back. Everyone was still destracted, so they could get out without a problem. And frostpaw was worried when the real Flameblaze would come back.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Duh." Darkpaw mewed

~-~Darkpaw~-~

"I heard it! He LOVES her!"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~