Anyone Still here can join. Will start trying to make posts soon. XD

"And when they're running for the hills, let them spread the word. Briarclan is too be feared!" He said, and again, the clan roared it's approval. Starclan, it seems, had made their choice."

whos.amung.us

Tuesday, July 13, 2010

The Beginning of the End.

     Swiftstar opened her eyes. She was in a lush, green forest. Have I lost a life? she thought, thinking it must be so, because she was no where near the moon-stream to visit with starclan. Slowly, she remembered. There was nothing wrong, with her, so she must be dreaming. It was a good dream, too. She could here the forest twittering with bird-song. Swiftstar could hear mice squeaking near the roots of the trees. And there were flowers everywhere. Blossoming with different colors. But she sensed something behind her. Something dark, and sinister. She whirled around, seeing something entirely different. There was a line, a line between the dark and the light. The dark side had bare trees, that looked as pale as bones, A thick, choking blackness just rolled out from all directions, and Swiftstar wrinkled her nose in disgust. These places were complete opposites, and after a few heartbeats she recognized where she was. At the boundary between Starclan and the Dark forest.
     Swiftstar held back a gasp, but curiousity overcame her at once. What was she doing, here? Of all places? She peered into the darkness, then recoiled. A pair of gleaming eyes were staring right back at her, and the owner of those eyes stepped out where she could see it.
  A large, muscular, grey and white cat walked up to Swiftstar. Scars criss-crossed on his pelt. Recognition flowed though Swiftstar like a black wave. It was Greystar, the leader of Brokenclan.
  "Your dead?" she asked him, wondering to herself why he wouldn't be attacking, and came to that conclusion. Greystar growled. "Unfortunatley, I am." he said. "I was sent here to tell you this:"

"you have two choices,

 only one you can cover,
 one leads to death,
 and death the other.
 Then an obstacle,
 you cannot pass,
 so live each day,
 like it's your last ."

He rasped, and then chuckled. "Three lives left, Swiftstar..... the time is already dwindling.........."

77 comments:

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw looked at Floe "Are you going to join... BriarClan, i mean,"

~=~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe snorted. "Of course!" she said matter-o-factly.

So I could still see you. she added silently,

>Floe<

(<3 the backround!)

✠Ember✠ said...

(I know it's awesome :) And the header rocks too!)

Ravenpaw nodded "Good, and are you feeling any better?"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

(thnx! And haha he probably heard her in her mind XD!)

"Yeah, lots!" she said.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw smiled "Thats great,"

Why does Floe want to see me? Thats why she's joining?

(i 4got about his powers lol)

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

(haha)

Floe smiled back.

Does he feel the same way?

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Do you think your well enough to go, for a walk in the terriotory?"

Does she like me? Do i like her?

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe looked herself over. I think i could manage.... she thought.

"Yeah." she told him.

Should I tell him that I like him?

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw smiled "Alright! Come on,"

SO she likes me... I think i might like her too, maybe.

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe followed him out of camp.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"So, you excited about being part of BriarClan,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yes!" She exclaimed.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw nodded "You will be a great warrior,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"You'll be a better one." she said back.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"How can i be if i'm blind?"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"My sister was a great fighter... she was blind." she said.

Through her mind she remembered her sister, dying to protect her from a band of evil cats.. they were from, wht was it called? oh... right, brokenclan her thoughts seared with hatred.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw was so taken aback but her thoughts, he forgot she didn't knoe he could read minds "Your sister was killed by BrokenClan?!"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

She narrowed her eyes, her happyness vanished.

"How would you know?" she said. "Have you been spying on me?"

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"No! I didnt know you till a few days ago," he mewed biting his lip

Great, now she wont like me

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Then how did you know?" she said suspiciously.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I guessesd, by the look of rage on your face,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No." Floe said, hardly believing it. "I could've been mad at something else, yet you knew I had a sister who was killed by Brokenclan. " she said. "You couldn't have told that by looking at my face." she added.

How did he do that!?!?

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I'm sorry FLoe, i can't tell you,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Why not?" she hissed.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I'm sorry, Floe i really am, but the others would kill me if i told you, i want to, I REALLY do,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

That stung Floe. (it SHOULDN"T) and she stood there for a few heartbeats.

"And yes." she sobbed. "that's how she died."

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw put his tail around her shoulders "I'm sorry Floe,"

~=~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe didn't saw anything but looked att he ground.

>Floe<

βяɛɛʓɛ said...

(hey del lets pretned this cat has been in the clan for a while KK? LOL)

Ivykit padded up to Swiftstar.
"can...Can i be the next..um...medicine cat?"She asked nervously.
~!Ivy!~

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw closed his eyes "Listen Floe, I really like you, and I don't want you to hate me, I'm sorry about your sister, please don't be mad anymore,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

I don't hate you. she thought.

"It's okay.." I guess.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw sighed. He looked desperate "Floe, i-i really like you i think i might, love you," his ears turned hot and his mussles tenced

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

("For reals?" she asks)
(jk >:D)

"I feel the same way." she whispered.

>Floe<
(why does this seem FAMILIAR?)

(oh yeah stormXfrozen)

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw smiled. "Well then tahts settled,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

I miss my sister so much...

"Thank you." she said.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw looked at her "Your sister must have been a great cat, I'm sure she loved you very much,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yeah, she was a good sister." she said.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I'm sure she was the best sister, my family is complicated..."

We have to practise powers... great

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"How so?" she asked.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"We have a lot of responsiblility since my dad... died,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"oh, sorry i brought it up." Floe murmured.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

"No, It's fine, sorry I brought up your sister,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Floe nodded. "Should we get back to.. er, camp?" she asked.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw sighed "Ya, we should,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"M'kay." she said. "You lead the way." she said, because she's only gone to camp once, and had no clue how to get there still.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw nodded leading her back to camp

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostpaw sat in camp next to Breezepaw looking around. Maybe we should have another meeting soon......

>Frostpaw<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frozenheart sighed. "I don't know." she said, noticing Stormwater still had her pinned down.

"Could you let me go?? I won't run away, I promise." she said.

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

He nodded and stepped off of her.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Thank you." Frozenheart said, getting up and smoothing her ruffled fur.

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

He felt the tip of his ears go red.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frozenheart cracked a smile.

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

Stormwater felt awkward and looked elsewhere.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frozenheart laughed.

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

"What are you laughing at?" he asked walking towards her, playfully.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"You." she said. "What's so embarrasing?"

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

"IDK, you ask me?" he said.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frozenheart shrugged, and began to climb up a tree, a big grin on her face,

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

"What are you doing?" he asked, looking up at her.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Climbing a tree." she said matter-o-factly.

"Can't catch me!" she said, sitting on a low branch.

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

"Oh, yeah!" he called and scrambled up te tree, jumping onto her branch.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frozenheart kept on climbing.

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

He raced after her until he finally, prevented herfrom climbing by pinning her tail down. "Gotcha now."

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Oh yeah?" she said, yanking her tail free and took a flying leap, into the next tree.

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

He called out to her, "I'm not such a good climber!" Then, made his way down thhe tree. "I climbed the trees, you swim!" he said and jumped into the nearby river.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frozenheart stiffened. "No wait." she said, and smelled the air. "I recognize that scent." she whispered.

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

He stopped and climbed up the bank. "What scent?" he asked.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Brokenclan." she hissed, and three cats leaped out from the bushes.

>Frozenheart<

MadiShae said...

Stormwater gasped and leaped at one jumping towards Frozenheart. Tackling the tom, he gave three hard blows and swiped his claws across it's muzzle. It whimpered and ran off. Wimp, he thought.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Two more warriors came in the tom's place. One of them was Flameblaze, the deputy. THe three other cats tackled Stomrwater making him immobile.

"We just want your escaped convinct." Flameblaze said, holding down Frozenheart. "We are taking her back to Brokenclan, and we'll let you go in peace knowing she'll be punished.

>Flameblaze<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw purred lightly, staying close to Floe "Wanna share some fresh-kill?"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Sure." she said, smiling.

>Floe<

Frostpaw suddenly jumped from where she was sitting, shaking her fur, which was now turning gray in patches. And she was growing. She knew something was up.

>Frostpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravenpaw purred picking out a fat mouse. He layed down motioning for Floe to sit next to him,"

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

Darkpaw looked over at Frostpaw "What are you THINKING?"

~-~Darkpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I don't know." she said in a low, deeper voice than her own. "But what-ever's out there, I have to be... erm......" she looked down at herself.

"Greystar?"

>Greystar/Frostpaw<

Floe sat down, smiling and looked at where Frostpaw leapt out of camp, confusion in her eyes.

>Floe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw tilted his head

~-~Darkpaw~-~

Ravenpaw purred "Thank-you..." he whispered

~-~Ravenpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Must have something to do with Brokenclan." she rumbled, and then saw a the border with Brokenclan and brairclan. Stormwater was held down by three cats, and Flameblaze held down Frozenheart.

The traitor. she thought. I hope they kill her. she added.

"Wait here." she hissed to Darkpaw, and stepped out into the open.

>Frostpaw/Greystar<

(you can play one of the BNC cats... if u want)

✠Ember✠ said...

Darkpaw sighed

~-~Darkpaw~-~

A brokenclan cat glared at Frostpaw "What do you want kit?"

~-~She-cat~-~