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"And when they're running for the hills, let them spread the word. Briarclan is too be feared!" He said, and again, the clan roared it's approval. Starclan, it seems, had made their choice."

whos.amung.us

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Three apprentices and two warriors

"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneath the thickbranch for a clan meeting!" Searingstar yowled as he leaped onto the Thickbranch.

"We have three new apprentices today! Murkpaw, Charcoalkit, and Bronzekit step forward"

"Murkpaw, From this moment on, until you receive your warrior name, you shall keep your name as Murkpaw,"

"Charcoalkit, from this moment on, until you receive your warrior name, you shall be known as Charcoalpaw!"

"Bronzekit, from this moment on, until you recieve your warrior name, you shall be known as Bronzepaw!"

"Murkpaw! Charcoalpaw! Bronzepaw!" the cats cheered.

"And two new warriors." he said.

"Cinderpaw and Lightpaw step forward!"


"I, Searingstar, leader of Briarclan call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on these two apprentices! They have trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I condemn them as warriors in their turn."

"Cinderpaw and Lightpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code, and protect and defend this clan, even if it cost your life?" he asked them

"I do!" they exclaimed.

"Then by the powers of starclan I give you your warrior names!"


"Lightpaw, you shall be known as Lightheart! Starclan honors your compassion and we welcome you as a full warrior of Briarclan!"

"Cinderpaw, you shall be known as Cinderblaze. Starclan honors your hunting skills and we welcome you as a full warrior of Briarclan!"

"Cinderblaze! Cinderblaze! Lightheart! Lightheart!"


"That is all." Searingstar said, going into his den.

>Searingstar<

Frostriver smiled and watched as Searingstar went into his den. Frostriver sat down heavily, thinking. How should I tell him...


>Frostriver<

 

31 comments:

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"We're apprentices now!" Murkpaw exclaimed to Charcoalpaw.

>Murkpaw<

Ashpaw looked around sighing.

I feel like sticking my head in a fox-hole.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar purred licking Floe's cheek proud his kits

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Charcoalpaw smiled at Murkpaw "We both have 'paw after our name now!!"

~-~Charcoalpaw~-~

Darkbreeze bit his lip padding up to Petalbrook "Hey,"

~-~Darkbreeze~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Murkpaw laughed. "Yup!"

>Murkpaw<

Emberpaw padded up to Thistlepaw, Burntpaw, and Spirtedpaw.

"You guys want to go for a walk?"

>Emberpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Yea!" Burntpaw anf Thistlepaw said at the same time

~-~Burntpaw/Thistlepaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Emberpaw smiled.

"Okay. And Ashpaw, you can come too." she said, seeing Ashpaw sulking in a corner.

>Emberpaw<

Burntpaw smiled. Maybe it would be an Adventure!

>Burntpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

(OMG SORRY I MEANT SPIRITEDPAW lol)

Spiritedpaw (oh whom I acidently called Burntpaw) Smiled

~-~Spiritedpaw~~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

(s'okay)

Ashpaw got to her paws, following all the apprentices out of camp.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Spiritedpaw sniffed "Mouse, vole starling..." he stiffned "Fox!"

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

All the apprentices stiffened, hackles raised as three foxed hurtled from the bushes and knocked them over, snarling.

>Foxes/Apprentices<

✠Ember✠ said...

Spiritedpaw slashed it's muzzle

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Emberpaw sunk her claws in one of them's back.

>emberpaw<

Burntpaw and Ashpaw both landed hard blows to the sides on one fox's head.

>Burntpaw/Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw leapt onto a fox, gracefully, then biting it's ear, not-so-gracefully

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

The apprentices ganged up on one at once, and it ran away after a few heartbeats, attacking the remaining two.

>Apprentices<

Emberpaw suddenly felt large teeth sink into her scruff, shaking her.

>Emberpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Spiritedpaw was hit with a paw. He flew backwards smashing into a tree. He heard a crackling, sound, he looked up, his eyes widened in horror and the branch came crashing down on him, he went limp

~-~Spiritedpaw (Not dead ~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Burntpaw gasped, running over to him and tried to push the branch off.

>Burntpaw,

Ashpaw struggled to hold the fox back.

>Ashpaw<

Emberpaw would held, but she was going dizzy then the Fox pinned her down, scratching her throat.

>Emberpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw leapt on the fox trying to get it's attention off Emberpaw

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

Spiritedpaw's head snapped up "I can't feel my legs! I can't feel my legs!" he choked out spitting blood onto the ground

~-~Spiritedpae~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

The fox whirled around, snapping at Thistlepaw.

>Thistlepaw<

Burntpaw pushed the branch off of him, staring in horror.

"No!"

>Burntpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

(:) )

Thistlepaw growled darting under it and scratching the underbelly

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

Spiritedpaw's eyes widened "I'm never going to be a warrior am I?" he asked quietly

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Don't think Like that." Burntpaw said.

>Burntpaw<

Ashpaw managed to drive off the fox she was fighting and bolted over to Emberpaw, who tried to say something but was gurgling.

>Ashpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw ran over to Emberpaw, her breathing shallow with worry "Emberpaw!"

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

Spiritedpaw smiled he dragged himself away "You know it's true Burntpaw, I can't feel my legs, let alone walk,"

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"That doesn't matter." Burntpaw said. "Your gonna be a warrior, with me."

>Burntpaw<

Emberpaw's eyes were clouded but they focused on Thistlepaw.

"I'll miss you, sister." she rasped.

>Emberpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw cried out "No! Don't die,"

~-~Thistlepaw~_~

Spiritedpaw nodded "I sure hope so," he smiled, then dragged himself over to Emberpaw, licking her cheek

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Emberpaw exchanged a glance with Thitlepaw, and looked at the two toms.

"There's something... we haven't told you." she rasped. "Your our.. half brothers." she said.

>Emberpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Spiritedpaw narrowed his eyes "No, you're our sister... Frostymoon and Copperflare are our parents..." he said slowly

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Frostymoon only had two kits, me and Thistlepaw." she said.

"Before Feathergaze died, s-she gave birth to you." she said, and slightly smiled. "I just thought that you should know that, before I go." she said, and stared sighlessly up at the sky.

>Emberpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Thistlepaw sighed, looking at the two toms, then she sobbed gragging her sister's body to camp leaving them there

~-~Thistlepaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Burntpaw looked with tears spilling from his eyes.

"C'mon, i'll help you back to camp." he said numbly.

>Burntpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Spiritedpaw nodded and began to drag himself slowly with his front paws

~-~Spiritedpaw~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Burntpaw tried to help him the best he could.

>Burntpaw<

Ashpaw followed Thitlepaw, limping.

>Ashpaw<

Copperflare looked to see Thistlepaw dragging Emberpaw through the entrance, and rushed over to them.

"What happened? Are you guys okay?" he asked his daughter.

>Copperflare<

✠Ember✠ said...

Tears rolled down Thistlepaw's cheeks "E-Emberpaw's dead! And she told Spiritedpaw and Burntpaw that Frostymoon wasn't their father, a-and Spiritedpaw, i-i think his spine is broken,"

~-~Thistlepaw

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Copperflare said, nothing, just pressed his nose into Emberpaw's cold fur.

>Copperflare<

Bronzepaw came out of the gloom, his eyes brimming in sorrow for his den-mate.

>Bronzepaw<

Burntpaw helped Spiritedpaw into the camp.

>Burntpaw<