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"And when they're running for the hills, let them spread the word. Briarclan is too be feared!" He said, and again, the clan roared it's approval. Starclan, it seems, had made their choice."

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Thursday, April 15, 2010

Battle

Swiftstar trudged on, through the thick undergrowth, with all of the apprentices and warrirors following her.

Briarberry's yowl stoped her in her tracks. "Brokenclan scent!" she yowled, and Swiftstar whipped around, notcing briarberry sniffing a bramble bush.

"They are already on our territory!" she snarled, enraged, and chared through the undergrwoth, to find a big group of Brokenclan cats trudging thier way. Swiftstar notced the Black and white pelt of Greystar in the front.
"Greystar!" Yowled, claws digging onto the dying grass.

"Give us back Faytekit!" she ywoled to Greystar. Greystar paused, confused.
"We don't have your kit!" he yowled. "But it seems now you are one cat shorter, and your now weaker then you already were!" he sneered.

In the back, She saaw Haweyes next to another Brokenclan warrior. Seeing this, she charged at the Brokenclan group. "ATTACK!" she snarled, and the cats broke into a battle.

-Swiftstar

114 comments:

MadiShae said...

Stormwater rushed into battle and tackled Firefang and scratched at his face.

-Stormwater

He scratched back at his throat and aimed for the throat.

-Firefang

He sees the battle and leads a secret patrol of rouges (friendly and helpful) into the clearing. He watches Stormwater and lunges at Firefang.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Ravenfeather started heading towards one warrior, but then Hawkeyes leaped ontop of him. He pushed him off, anf stared at his brother in disbelief.

'How can I fight my own Brother?' he thought.

-Ravenfeather

MadiShae said...

They both pummel at his head, sending him back into the heather.

-Thunderspirit and Stormwater

Leaving him to another white she-cat, he walked into camp, hoping not to bump into anyone.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Ravenfeather took a step back.

"I can't fight you" he said steadly at Hawkeyes.

"Well that's too bad! HAwkeyes snarled, ad leaped on top of him.

-Ravenfeather

MadiShae said...

He kept going until he reached the camp entrance.

-Thunderspirit

He rushed over to his former apprentice and swept his paws from under him. "You never were good at defending!" he snarled at Hawkeyes.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Oh Yeah!" hawkeyes said, aiming a few blows at stormwater.

Ravenfeather leaped onto another Brokenclan cat, bowling him over.

-Hawkeyes/Ravenfeather

MadiShae said...

He continued on and into the nursery.

-Thunderspirit

He let out a low growl and attacked him, pinning him and pummeling at his belly.

-Stormwater

✠Ember✠ said...

Frostypaw lunged on to a black tom, latching onto his neck and clawing his stomach

~Frostypaw

Dustypaw bowled over a blakc and white tom, but she realized she was surrounded. She jumped up high in the air leaping onto ones back. What else could she do?

~Dustypaw

Snowstar said...

Leaped on top of a gray tabby BrokenClan she-cat. Scratched her claws down her spine, before another BrokenClan cat leaped to the tabby's aid.

She felt like she was drowning in the sea of heaving cats.

She whirled around, catching the other cat with her claws, raking his sides. He screeched. "What did you do to Fayetkit?" she hissed. "Don't say you don't know, we know you do."

-Silvercloud

MadiShae said...

He saw a trapped apprentice and went to help her by attacking a dark gray tabby tom.

-Stormwater

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Notcing Dustypaw surrounding, he bowled over two of te cats surrounding her, takiing on both at once.

-Ravenfeather

MadiShae said...

He saw a apprentice surrounded and went to go help after sending Hawkeyes flying with a kick. He lept onto a dark gray tabby tom.

-Storrmwater

Snowstar said...

Silvercloud's second attacker sprang back into the heat of the battle as the first attacker leaped on her back. She quickly flipped over, crushing her attacker to the ground and then raking her thorn-sharp claws down the cat's sides.

-Silvercloud

MadiShae said...

He walked into the nursery and over two a bundle of four kits.

-Thunderspirit

✠Ember✠ said...

Dustypaw nodded in thanks to Stormwater and continued to fight

~Dustypaw

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Hawkeyes recovered, and jumped onto Featherleaf's back.

-Hawkeyes

MadiShae said...

He sat down and gazed down at his kits happily until one of them opened their eyes.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

The three kits trudge through the undergrowth, and seee a mass of fur and screatching in the clearing ahead.

"There they are!" Frostkit hissed.

"How are we going to get thier attention?" Breezekit asked.

"I don't know." Frostkit admitted.

-Frostkit

MadiShae said...

"Get who's attention," he asks from behind.

-Thunderspirit

✠Ember✠ said...

Dustypaw tackles another tom

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

The kits spun around.

"uhhhhh" was all Frostkit could say.

-Frostkit

MadiShae said...

"Well?"

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"We have to stop this battle!" Willowkit blurted out.

-Willowkit

MadiShae said...

"Why?" he said puzled.

-Thunderspitiy

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Becuase, Brokenclan doesn't have Faytekit!" WIllowkit explained.

"Cats will get hurt for no reason...." Frostkit mumbled.

-Frostkit

MadiShae said...

He twitched his ear at the name of his daughter. "Who has her!?"

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"We aren't sure" Frostkit said, looking down.
"But youi gotta help us! 'Frostkit moewed pleadinly.

She sniffed and smelled something in the air... something.. acrid.

"YOu smell that?" she asked.

-Frostkit

MadiShae said...

"I'll help, and yes I do smell that."

(What is it?)

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

(a fire, but it won't be noticed till later. Something in the battle has to happen first.

Swiftstar felt Sharp claws scraping her back, and looked to see Hawkeyes was on top of her.

They rolled around, a screching bundle of fur.

Swiftstar aimed a blow at Hawkeyes, and his nose started bleeding.

"Give it up." Swiftstar asid. "You lost."

Anger and fury lit Hawkeye's eyes as he lunged for his other's throat.

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

He turned to see this and lunged at Hawkeyes, tearing them apart.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Ravenfeather was waqtching but it was too late, and his Mother collapsed on the ground, blood gushing out of her neck.

Frostkit then Raced into camp.

"FIRE!" she yowled.

-Ravenfeather.

MadiShae said...

"Noooooo!!" he yowled and ran to Swiftstar while Stormwater raced after the kits.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Greystar looked around, seeing a wall of fire surround them, closing thm into the clearing.

"There's no escape" he heard one warrior wail.

Briarclan and Brokenclan were hunched up, as if there hadn't been a battle just now.

"What are we going to do?" another one asked.

"We... have to work together" he moewed reluctantly.

-Greystar

MadiShae said...

"Trees! Climb the trees. Get a partner and climb, then jump from tree to tree until your out!" he yowled.

-Stormwater

He lay still with his head buried in Swiftstar's fur, not listening to the orders.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Frostkit Glanced around, noticing trees were collapsing around her, but there still was no escape.

Ravenfeather looked around.

"There are no trees to climb!" he moewed to Stomrwater.

He thought fast.

"We can kick dust and stone onto it!" he exclaimed.

"Both Brokenclan and BRiarclan need to do it" he said, and too scared to objected, starting kicking dust and stones onto the fire!"

-Ravenfeather

MadiShae said...

He coughed as a mouthful of dirt landed in his mouth.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Swiftstar looked up from Where she was sitting, and saw Hawkfeather come out of no where.

"Yeah, I know the drill" Swiftstar said to her former mate.

"Only three lives left...." Swiftstar muttered.

"Hurry! You must go back to help both clans!" Hawkfeather meowed urgently, and Swiftstar woke up.

-SWiftstar

MadiShae said...

"Swiftstar?" he said quietly as she awoke.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Thunderspirit" She said. "Your here." she sighed.

Then she notced the fire and sprang up, coughing.

"What has happened?" she asked.

-SWiftstar

MadiShae said...

"I don't know, but I'm glad your alive," he says nuzzling her.

-Thundersspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

SHe purred. But then she notced the flames starting to die out.

"It's working!" Ravenfeather yowled.

Swiftstar looked at him,, pride in her gaze at her son.

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

Sormwater nodded and encouraged the young warrior.

-Stormwater

"Stay safe, I'll help-kits! Where'd they go?!"

-Thunderspirit

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Lilypaw rushed over. "Swiftstar! Are you okay? Is everyone okay?"

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

The kits, with Ashes on their fur, padded out into the open, looking around.

Breezekit said.

"Wow frostkit! How did you start a fire?" he asked.

Despite what happened, the clans all purred in amusement.

Greystar dipped his clan.

"This battle is over. Lt are clans travel home in peace." he moewed to swiftstar, and padded away, his clan folowing.

"We must go now!" Siwftsatr yelled to the remains of the clan, glaring silently at the kits.

She noticed hawkeyes under a fallen tree, his eyes glazed.

"He's dead." she whispered. Destpe what he did, he was still her son,a dn she crounched by him.

-HAwkeyes

Snowstar said...

Silvercloud pads out of the clearing, the battle over. "They don't have Faytekit." she mewed. "We battled over what?"

-Silvercloud

MadiShae said...

"I'm sorry," he said glancing at their kits and Hawkeyes.

-Thunderspirits

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I'm sorry. I should've thought clearer I just thought..." her eye clouded.

'I'm not fit to lead this clan anymore' she thought.

"We will still keep looking, but first we gotta head home" she said.

(this is a good time for any cats you want to get rid of to die)

-SWiftstar

MadiShae said...

(Scarheart of breathing in too much smoke. Blazefoot moves to an elder. And Jumpfoot by a bad bite in the throat.)

"Thought clearer about what?"

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"About if they stole Faytekit. But, i was just so mad...." she trailed off.

-Swiftstar

Snowstar said...

"We still have hope of finding Faytekit, Swiftstar."

-Silvercloud

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I know..... llet's get back to camp." she moewed, and started leading the cats out of the ashy clearing.

-Swiftstar

Snowstar said...

Follows Swiftstar

-Silvercloud

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Swiftsatr brusts into the clearing. Some of the elders and queens ame out of thier dens.

"What happened?" they asked.

"I'll tell you soon" she propmised.

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

"Don't worry, Swiftstar. We'll find her. I'LL find her if it takes my last breath," he says not realizing he was n the wrong clan.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Swiftstar nodds.

"I hope so."

They padd into camp.

"Thunderspirit. I need to tell you something......" she meowed.

"But I can't tell any cat, we must go somewhere where no one will see us." she said, jesturing to an abandoned bramble bush.

-Swiftstar

(oooooo she's gonna tell his something.....)

MadiShae said...

He nodded and walked over to it and waited for Swiftstar to come. When she comes, he asks, "So, what is it."

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Scraped ground with one paw.

"I'm leaving the clan." she said. "I ,ade the wrong choice, and I led my clan into battle without reason." she said.

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

He sat there puzzled for second, then burst out laughing. "What?! I mean my sister's done some crazy things, too. Like attacking you, for instance."

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I lost Faytekit." she meowed.

"And never knew Hawkeyes betrayed me. My own son." she said.

"I'm blinder than a cat without eyes."

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

"No you aren't. I've done some pretty bad things. I betrayed my clan with you, but then again, Silverstar. . . . And I practicly murdered my brother," he said looking at his paws.

(BTW Silverstar and Rainpaw (dead) are his sister and brother.)

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"If I left....." she trailed off, and looked at Thunderspirit.

"Would you come with me?" she asked.

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

"Your not really leaving are you?"

-Swiftstar

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Ravenfeather heard Swiftstar's voice, and padded in front of the leaders den.

He heard what she said, and almost gasped, but quietly, he hid in a bush beside th entrance.

(NO ONE SEES HIM YET EXCEPT IF SOMEONE WAS ALSO SMEAKING)

-Ravenfeather

MadiShae said...

"Well?"

-Thunderspirit

✠Ember✠ said...

Dustypaw who was sneaking back from seeing Breeze saw Swiftstar and a tom talking, she snuck into a bush and watched silently

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

(Ravenfeather glanced at Dustypaw, noticing what she was doing.)

"Hey" he whispered.

-Ravenfeather

"I have to." she meowed solemly.

"But whereever I go, I will look for Faytekit, and if I find her, I will come back." she vowed.

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

"But. . . I'll go. You have a clan to look after," he says, obviously not changing his mind.

-Thunderspirit

✠Ember✠ said...

Dustypaw lookd surprised "Hi!" she wispered back

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Lilypaw's belly was buldging. Four cats already had asked her if she was eating too much. Even though she was still an apprentice, she was due in two moons by her calculations. She saw Ravenfeather and Dustypaw peering over a bush. She walked over.

"What are you two doing?" Lilypaw spat loudly.

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"no.It was ravenfeatheer who will lead the clan." she said.

"He, saved us, not me. And i won't be gone forever." she added.

-Swiftstar

✠Ember✠ said...

"SHHHHHHHH!" Dustypaw spat strictly

MadiShae said...

"B-But. . . . What about are other kits? I haven't even met them yet."

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Shhhh!" he whispered to lilpaw.

-Ravenfeather

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Lilypaw rolled her eyes and stalked off, then realized what she had just heard. "RAVENFEATHER WILL LEAD THE CLAN?????" Lilypaw yowled, and ran back to the bushes and stormed in.

MadiShae said...

He perked up at the loud rustling in the bushes and crouched down.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"you can meet them first." she said.

"No one will ever trust me again." she took it in.

"I'm the cat with blue eyes and black fur." she whispered, dazed.

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

"I can!" he says excitedly.

-Thunderspirit

✠Ember✠ said...

Dustypaw couldn't belive what she was hearing she looked at Ravenfeather "I cant believe it!"

~Dustypaw

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I have to get Lilypaw!" he hissed to Dustypaw.

"Stay here" he said, with a pleading look in his eyes.

-Ravenfeather

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Lilypaw!" she hissed.

"What are you doing here?" she asked.

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

He stopped in his tracks, and perked his ears from beside Swiftstar.

-Thunderspirit

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Lilypaw backed up. "DUstypaw and Ravenfeather are eavesdropping. I heard something while I was telling them to go away.... Can I talk to you without THEM eavesdropping... and without HIM?" Lilypaw asked, glaring at Ravenfeather, Dustypaw, and Thunderspirit.

✠Ember✠ said...

Dustypaw shook her head but stayed where she was, depretly wishing Breeze was there

~Dustypaw

MadiShae said...

He glared back at Lilypaw.

-Thundersspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

She nodded.

"I can tell it's impotant" she said, with a glance at Thunderspirit.

"Dustypaw" she called. "Can you show Thunderspirit to the nursery?" she asked.

"And Ravenfeather, I need to spaek to you next And dustypaw." she added

-Swiftstar

The cats nodded and headed off

MadiShae said...

He waited for Dustypaw to lead him to the nursery.

-Thunderspirit

✠Ember✠ said...

Dustypaw nodded for Thunderspirit to follow her to the nursery

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Lilypaw stared quietly at Swiftstar. "I told this to Frostkit and Frostypaw knows... i know I'm still an apprentice, but I'm full grown and I think Brownspots is going to give me my name at the half moon, but I met a cat named Flame, and he had a thorn in his paw so I helped him, but I kind of... fell in love with him and now..." Lilypaw took a deep breath before blurting everything out. "I'M EXPECTING KITS! I'm so sorry, I never planned it to be like this! They're due really soon, and I'm expecting three. The newborn kit who came here yesterday... I nursed her in the briar and Frostkit found me there... with milk scent. I'm really sorry, you can punish me if you want, I'd understand." Lilypaw meowed.

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...
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MadiShae said...

He followed Dustypaw into the nursery. "Where's Swiftstar's kits?"

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I can't punish you" she moewed to Lilpaw.

"Then I would be a Hypocrite." she explained.

-Swiftstar

✠Ember✠ said...

Dustypaw pointed her tail toward Swiftstar's kits "They are beautiful! Aren't they!?"

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Willowkit padded up to her father.

"Hey!" she said, craning her neck.

-Willowkit

MadiShae said...

"Yes," he breathed. "Hello, little one." Then, he touched noses with his daughter.

-Thunderspirit

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Lilypaw looked up. "Thanks for understanding. I think Brownspots knows, she's been looking at my belly weirdly all day." Lilypaw meowed. "Please don't tell anyone, okay? Especially not Ravenfeather." Lilypaw meowed.

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Remeber the battle?" she asked.

"You were like, (mimiks fighting moves) and then I remeber when you spun around, and Sent two Brokenclan warriros Running with thier tails between thier legs!" she exclaimed. (LOL)

-Willowkit

MadiShae said...

"Of course I know," she purred in a friendly way. "I was a warrior before I was a medicine cat. My kits wre weak and died not long after birth. Don't worry, Lilypaw."

-Brownspots

MadiShae said...

He purred and asked her name and where her littermates were.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Okay" Swiftstar said, a little smile in her voice.

"Brownspots, Lilypaw." she moewed.

"I am sorry, but I must go." she moewed.

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

She nodded respectfully and walked to the med. cat den with Lilypaw.

-Brownspots

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Lilypaw nodded. "I'm just so worried that someone will find out like Frostypaw and Frostkit did...." Lilypaw whispered quietly. "I'm so worried that the Clan will hate them."

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Willowkit!" she meowed.

"And this is Breezekit and Frostkit!
she meowed cheerfully.

-Willowkit

MadiShae said...

He gazed at his kits warmly and nodded at Willowkit.

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

" I have to find Faytekit>" she moewed to Lilypaw.

"So I have to leave for a little while." she added.

"WHen I'm gone, you can tell the clan that I'm dead." she meowed.

-Swiftsta

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"No one will hate them." she meowed.

'But how can i promise that id i won't be here?' she thought.

-SWwiftstar

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

"Please! No... don't. The Clan needs you, and I won't tell a pure lie. I don't tell lies, especially at this time in my life." Lilypaw meowed, and looked down at her belly. Kits were coming whether she liked it... or not.

MadiShae said...

He walked over to Swiftstar. "I'm coming with you, but who'll watch our kits?"

-Thunderspirit

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Briarberry will. She already know what's happening.' she meowed.

"I have to." She meowed. "And I'll be back."

"Just please... don't tell!" she meowed to in desperation.

-Swiftstar

MadiShae said...

"How can I if I'm coming with yyou? Just remember to stay safe-" he froze as remembered. "How many lives do you have left?"

-Thunderspirit

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

"I can watch them. Everyone will figure out eventually, and I also take care of the kit that came yesterday. I won't tell, but I won't say you're dead either." Lilypaw meowed crabbily.

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

(she's talking to Lilypaw)

"Three" she whispered.

-swiftstar

MadiShae said...

(Oh)

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"You don't have to be the one who will tell them" she said.

"And Okay, I trust you with them." sorrow filled her gaze.

-Swifstar

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Lilypaw nodded, hoping Willowkit, Frostkit, and Breezekit would give her some experience before she had her own. "Should I stay with them in the nursery, or in my den, because Frostkit knows already."