"Alcie, are you sure it's this way?" asked a brown tabby she-cat, but she barely seemed to be like one. "Almost, Max. It's around this ridge." they said, walking, or gliding over the forest floor. Remy followed close behind, with the whole hoard of others. "I can't wait to see the looks on their sniveling fat faces when we come." Max growled. "They'll see how powerful we are and then they'll know not to keep all this land for themselves!" she added, and others nodded in agreement, some snarling with satisfaction.
After a while, they make it over the ridge, but barely heard a sound or saw anything. "Are you sure this is-" Max started to say but Alcie cut her off. "Yes!"
The Circled around the camp, away from the sentries at the entrance, already well-planned. Max cave the battle cry, and they charged into the camp, surprising the cats of Briarclan.
>Max<
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Remy smiled attacking a young kit caught in the storm of cats "Haha... figures"
"What's so funny?" the black tom mewed
"Nothing." Remmy chuckled
~-~Remy~-~
Stonepaw leaped onto Remy, hissing.
>Stonepaw<
Max flexed her shoulders, leaping and pinning down Ravensoar.
>Max<
Remy turned quickly, knocking the apprentice out of the air, letting the kit scurry free. What he didn't realize was that he was being surrounded by Shadowingpaw, Tigerpaw and Burnedpaw
~-~Remy~-~
Stonepaw landed on his feet, attacking another rogue.
>Stonepaw<
The three apprentices attacked, overpowering Remy "Alcie!" he gasped. The ginger she-cat ran over, throwing the apprentices off her friend "Stupid Remy. I TOLD you, beware of surprises!" she hissed, running off
~-~Alcie~-~
Max scored her claws down Ravensoar's back.
"Filthy clan cat!" She yowled.
>Max<
Blake hissed, tackling Stonepaw to the ground, them locked in battle.
>Blake<
Ravensoar rolled his eyes "Ya, ya. Whatever. I'm blind, a deputy, Obviously you wanna kill me. Too bad, I'm not in the mood for dying." he pushed Max off him, scoring his claws down her flank and biting as hard as he could on her ear
~-~Ravensoar~-~
She growled in pain, then clawed his legs.
>Max<
Ravensoar hissed, sweeping her front paws out from under her, he pinned her down "Don't try to escape."
~-~Ravensoar~-~
Io tackled a dark brown tom hissing "Filthy clan cat?"
~-~Io~-~
Stonepaw was sent flying, and Blake went to find someone else.
>Blake<<
Max struggled, trying to sink her claws into him.
>Max<
One of the more ragged rouges leaped on Floe, and they rolled over each-other, scratching and biting.
>Floe<
Ravensoar rolled his eyes "You loose."
~-~Ravensoar~-~
Io, bit the toms neck, making him stumble back, he attacked a she-cat
~-~Io~-~
"Let.. me ... go!" She growled.
>Max<
Floe eventually sent the tom running off, but a she-cat took his place.
>Floe<
Silentkit flattened her ears and hissed, terrified. Who were these strange cats and why were they invading her home and killing her Clanmates?! She was powerless to help. She saw the leader pinned underneath a clan cat and silently cheered, not wanting to attract attention to herself.
~Silentkit
Tigerpaw pinned down the black tom "Who ARE you?" she hissed
The tom spit on her face "Io."
~-~Tigerpaw~-~
Ravensoar rolled his eyes "What is the point of asking?"
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"To distract you!" She said, slipping from his grip.
>Max<
"I wasn't distracted, just bored. Couldn't you be a little more interesting? I just got my mojo back, so, it'd be much appreciated."
~-~Ravensaor~-~
Max was irritated, and narrowed her eyes at him. "Mojo?"
>Max<
"You know? Pride, Life, Youth, Strength, Spirit, Courage, personality, so on."
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"What about revenge?" she hissed.
>Max<
"No. Thats not Mojo, thats weakness." Ravensoar mewed decently, as if he were having an convorsation with a clanmate
~~-~Ravensaor~-~
"Revenge makes you strong." She retorted.
>Max<
"No, it makes your vision clouded, it makes you so dead set of one thing, you don't notice the other. Why do you want revenge on us anyway?"
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"Your kind drove my parent to starvation." She snarled. "And I do not want that to happen again!"
>Max<
"Huh?"
~-~Ravensoar~-~
Max leaped at him, pinning him down.
"Why did you kill them!?!?" She snarled in outrage.
>Max<
"I didnt..."
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"Max, that's not him!" Blake said, running over.
>Blake<
Slowly, the number of rogues got smaller and smaller....
>Narration<
(NARRATION..... I find that funneh :D)
Io hissed getting off the she-cat, standing next to Alcie "Hey cuz."
Alcie rolled her eyes, as she gazed out at the battle "Shut-up Io."
~-~Io~-~
Max found herself pinned down by Ravensoar again.
>Max<
There were only five rogues left, Remy, Alcie, Blake, Io (it's off to work we go) and Max. The clan cats made a circle around them, making sure they didn't escape.
>Narration<
Searingstar stepped out into the circle, eying the rogues.
>Searingstar<
Blake looked at all the cats, his kit fluff fur puffed up in fear.
>Blake<
Io glared at the cats, trying to look tough, but his fluffy fur made it hard
~-~Io~-~
Ravensoar looked down "You could have prevented this, you were blinded by your rage, you didn't notice you were loosing."
~-~Ravensoar~-~
Remy glared at the cats, his hackles raised
~-~Remy~-~
Alcie remained looking at them with her blue eyes, peircing certian cats, making them look away
~-~Alcie~-~
"Whatever."
>Max<
"Keep them prisoner." Searingstar ordered.
>Searingstar<
Ravensoar nodded "where will we keep them?"
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"In the old overgrown den." he said, pointing to the bush hollow a little ways off from the warriors den.
>Searingstar<
Ravensoar nodded "You will follow me." he told the Rougues "If you try anything, remember, there are five of you, a whole clan of us."
~-~Ravensoar~-~
Max curled her lip but said nothing.
We should never had done this without more rogues... she thought furiously.
>Max<
"They still would have fled Max."
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"What?"
>Max<
"You thought you should have come with more rougues, it wouldn't have worked."
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"I... didn't say that out loud." she said, feeling woozy.
>Max<
"Yep."
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"Then how'd you know?" She hissed.
>Max<
"Duh. I read minds, get with the program Max."
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"I didn't know!" she hissed, felling a sharp pain in her belly.
Ow
>Max<
Ravensoar froze "Max. Are you expecting?!"
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"No!" she lied.
>Max<
"You are. There is pain in your stomach isn't there?!! Tell me, are your kits coming now?"
~-~Ravensoar~-~
"No, they aren't." She said, looking away.
>Max<
"They are. Well, your stuck in this den. When you want help, just call. Charcoalwing, Murkfall, keep guard." he mewed, choosing she-cats on purpose, who had had kits before.
~-~Ravensoar~-~
Remy looked at Max "Well, are the kits really coming?" he whispered
~-~Remy~-~
"No, not yet." Max said.
Soon.....
>Max<
Murkfall nodded
>Murkfall<
Remy nodded "Whos the father?"
~-~Remy~-~
Alcie sighed, looking at Io "You're too young to hear all this, same with you Blake, you two will be sleeping at the far end of this den, got it?"
~-~Alcie~-~
Blake nodded. "Okay."
>Blake<
Max shrugged. "I don't remember his name."
>Max<
"I think you'd remember." Then, he stopped, seeming to remember something "You know what, never mind. You woundn't."
~-~Remy~-~
Max nodded, curling her tail around her paws.
>Max<
Remy closed his eyes, "Well, that was a stupid move. I thought you were smart Max."
~-~Remy~-~
"I am!" Max hissed.
>Max<
"Then why are we prisoners!?"
~-~Remy~-~
"I thought we had enough cats!"
>Max<
"Then, you're NOT smart. Alcie should have led this!" he hssed
~-~Remy~-~
"I'm sorry." she said, looking away.
>Max<
Remy sighed "Sorry, but you know how much I hate clanlife, my family abandoned me to join one..."
~-~Remy~-~
"Yeah. I know how much this meant to you."
>Max<
"It ment a lot to all of us."
~-~Remy~-~
Max nodded.
>Max< u
Remy smiled
~-~Remy~-~
A greater spasm of pain engulfed Max, and she tried hard not to show it.
>Max<
Remy froze "Are they coming?"
~-~Remy-~
Max nodded, her legs trembling.
It's too early.
>Max<
"Help!" Remy called "Uh... lay down?! I don't know! Kits aren't my thing!"
~-~Remy~-~
Charcoalwing ran in with borage and a stick
~-~Charcoalwing~-~
Max did, feeling sick.
>Max<
CHarcoalwing gave Max the borage "Bite on the stick, calm down, breath deeply."
~-~Charcoalwing~-~
Max nodded. She she felt the first kit come out, followed by another a few heartbeats after. Then she felt blood flowing, and her heart raced with fear, but she felt darkness engulf her, until she couldn't see, and then her body went cold.
>Max<
Murkfall came rushing in.
"What.....?"
>Murkfall<
Charcoalwing looked down, "She's dead." she looked at the rougues "She's... gone."
~-~Charcoalwing~-~
Blake's eyes filled with tears.
>Blake<
Io looked down, "Who will take care of the kits?"
~-~Io~-~
"i d-don't know." Murkfall said, still in shock.
>Murkfall<
Muddleblaze walked in "I could... sorry, I was eavesdropping... but, I'm expecting again... and uh... well, I would love to help, what are their names?"
~-~Muddleblaze~-~
Muddleblaze walked in "I could... sorry, I was eavesdropping... but, I'm expecting again... and uh... well, I would love to help, what are their names?"
~-~Muddleblaze~-~
Blake stepped up. "S-she didn't name them, but if it helps Max said if she ever had kits she would name them Birch and Moon."
>Blake<
"Which ones Moon and which one is Birch?"
~-~Muddleblaze~-~
Remy looked away "Will you at least let us Bury her?"
~-~Remy~-~
Murkfall nodded, looking at Charcoalwing, and they both carried Max's body away.
>Murkfall<
"The one that looks like her would be Birch." Blake said, remembering what Max told him.
>Blake<
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