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"And when they're running for the hills, let them spread the word. Briarclan is too be feared!" He said, and again, the clan roared it's approval. Starclan, it seems, had made their choice."

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Friday, January 28, 2011

Another Killing Spree. By Coal, of course.

   "That's it Cinderpaw. Your not going back to the living world." Coal growled to Cinderpaw, pacing in front of him.
    "But-" Cinderpaw protested, put Coal cut him off. "No!" Just then Bronzefeather walked in, grinning. "Ya know, you should listen to your father. Or he might ground you." he said,  then burst out laughing. Coal just rolled his eyes.
     "You see what happens when your weak and mortal? If you follow in my footsteps you could be immortal and powerful beside me. And we will control the infinity and not Stark."
     "But you know that only a cat without a soul can-" "That's ENOUGH! Who told you such lies?!?!?" Coal growled, and Cinderpaw flattened his ears, making sure to keep all thoughts of the other rift cats he met out of his mind.
    Cinderpaw sighed. He wished he didn't have to do this. Even Rose had already known what he was doing, and thought he was evil. I wanna be with them. Not stuck here he growled in his head, not caring if his father heard.
       "Well, you corrupting Briarberry sure didn't do anything." Bronzefeather jeered. "It just made everything worse. Just because YOU wanted all the cat's with power's, well, powers, when they died! And then it just DIDN'T HAPPEN. Time just slapped you in the face." he explained.
    Coal looked at Bronzefeather in astonishment. "That is probably the most words you've ever said in one time, Bronzefeather." he said, and then both him and Cinderpaw started laughing.
    "Some day, Some day Bronzefeather. Not today." Coal said. "Ummm what?" Bronzefeather asked, and Coal just glared at him. "I'm fine, thank you very much." he said, and disappeared.

>Cinderpaw<

    Coal looked at another hunting patrol and smiled. They looked weary, probably cautious of what happened last time. He changed his form to look like Chaos, and when then the hunting party split up, he went after Soakedspirit and Thistlerose, lightly touching them with his tail and snickered as their bodies fell to the ground. "the sun will come out.. tomorrow..." he started singing, but then stopped as he heard the others coming. But it was just Jaypaw.
    She narrowed her eyes. "Chaos? What happened to ....?" She didn't get to finish that sentence because Coal snatched her away, and they both disappeared a heartbeat before the patrol discovered the two dead bodies.

>Coal<

   "Stay here." he said, dropping Jaypaw off at the rift and then appearing in the Brokenclan camp, and he changed into one of the warriors, walking casually over to the nursery, spotting what he wanted.
   "Psst. hey, kits." he said to the kits that were curled next to each other, sleeping. As soon as they blinked open their eyes they disappeared, and so did Coal.
 ~~~

He paced around the rift as the three new cats there looked at them in bewilderment.

"You three are just what I needed. Some kin."

>Coal<
 

69 comments:

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar looked down at the dead body of his daughter's mate and his aunts Daughter "No..."

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Suddenly Cinderpaw came rushing up to them.

"NO! I was too late!" he said, his eyes round with sadness.

>Cinderpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Burnedkit opened his startlingly blue eyes, looking a lot like Chaos "Who are you. Your related to Sparrow___?" (what was her name?)

~-~Burnedkit-~

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar blinked "What??"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Coal's off on his killing spree again. Last time it was Burntsky and Gazepaw? Remember that?" Cinderpaw insisited.

>Cinderpaw<

"Nope."

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Then how am I your kin? She's my mom."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

"Yes. That was coal?!"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Charcoalwing ran up "I just heard!" she sobbed pushing her nose in Soakedspirit's cold fur

~-~Charcoalwing~-~

✠Ember✠ said...

Talon looked at the scene quietly

"Coal. You think your so funny..." he muttered furiously "Youre just mediocre."

~-~Talon~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yeah." Cinderpaw said. "I'm sorry."

>Cinderpaw<

"More cats... ugh" Stark said, digging his claws into the ground.

>Stark<

✠Ember✠ said...

Talon looked at him "He brought more?" he hissed

~-~Talon~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"She's not your real mother." Coal said, rolling his eyes.

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Who's are real mother then? "

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Muddleblaze." Coal said, grinning.

"Don't ya just get tired of this?" he muttered to Bronzefeather.

"By the way, go and fetch Cinderpaw back, will you?"

"Yes sir!" Bronzefeather said sarcastically and ran off.

>Coal<

Bronzefeather appeared next to cinderpaw, glaring at the other cats.

"You should listen to Coal." he growled at Cinderpaw. "Stop coming out of the rift."

>Bronzefeather<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Who's our dad then?" Burnedkit mewed "And I don't like it here, it makes me feel all weird."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"ehh get used to it. and that doesn't matter right now."

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Ya it does. And no I wont, Me and Firekit are leaving."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"How ya gonna do that?"

>Coal<

"No! I'm not coming." Cinderpaw said, flinching.

Bronzefeather looked at Ravensoar.

"Oh hey Ravensoar! Long time not see!" He said, and then looked at cinderpaw again.

"Coal's gonna get angry!"

>Bronzefeather<

✠Ember✠ said...

Ravensoar sighed "Burntfeather, get back to camp now, and this tom doesn't have to go anywhere/"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

"I don't know, but I am. I like my pelt solid thank-you very much," he mewed looking at Coal's transparent one


~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Ummm your not the boss of me. And Cinderpaw has to get to the rift, NOW."

"Come back later." Cinderpaw grumbled.

"Fine." Bronzefeather said afte ra few heartbeats.

"I'll say hi to Jaypaw to you." He said, winking, and he disappeared into the forest.

>Bronzefeather<

Coal shook his head back and forth.

"Good luck with that."

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Jaypaw? He took Jaypaw?" Ravensoar asked urgently "Who else?"

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Burnedkit growled at Coal pouncing at him

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Coal sighed as Burnedkit passed right through him.

"Ugh that always feels funny>

>Coal<

"Umm, he said two kits from Brokenclan also, but I don't know who." Cinderpaw said.

>Cinderpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"BrokenClan... Willowsun... Duskgaze... By chance... could you ask if their names were, Firekit and Burnedkit?"
Ravensoar asked cautiously
~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Cinderpaw shrugged.

"Maybe, Maybe not."

>Cinderpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Well find out and please tell me, they are my grandchildren."

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Burnedkit smiled jumping in and out of Coal "I'm not touching you!!"

~-~Burnedkit~-

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Stop it, it tickles!" Said Coal.

>Coal<

Cinderpaw looked away.

>cinderpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"I'm not touching you!" Burnedkit mewed louder

~-~Burnedkit~-~

"Please."

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Cinderpaw sighed.

"They're probably gonna die sooner or later." he muttered.

>Cinderpaw<

"Ummm." Jaypaw said.

>Jaypaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Burnedkit purred "You're not to bad Grandpa!"

~-~Burnedkit~-~

"No... you're not dead"

~-~Ravensaor~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yeah, i can't."

>Cinderpaw<

Coal chuckled.

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

Burnedkit smiled "I'm safe here right. Nothings gonna happen to me cause your big and strong, and I'm your kin... so I'm big and strong?"

~-~Burnedkit~-~

"Oh."

~-~Ravensoar~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"You will be."

>Coal<

"Yeah. Anyways... I should probably go."

>Cinderpaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Alright. Stay strong."

~-~Ravensoar~-~

Burnedkit smiled "Yesss."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yeah... whatever." Cinderpaw said., limping away and disappearing.

>Cinderpaw<

"But you can't leave, or you'll be weak and little."

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Okey Dokey."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Yup."

>coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Soooooooooooooooooooooo, you evil?"

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Not exactly evil, but the ways i do things are frowned upon.

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"So evil?"

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Meh." he said, shrugging.

He turned to Jaypaw.

"I wonder why your still an apprentice. I mean, you were as old as Chaos and yet he's been a warrior for moons now." Coal said.

"They just don't think I'm ready-" "What a load of foxdung." Coal interrupted her.

"Maybe, did you think it was because they don't trust you? That Ravensoar doesn't trust you?" Coal said, and Jaypaw's eyes widened with indecision.

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Well... why would it be Ravensoar, thats NOT a leader name. Duhhhh, it would be Searingstar that doesn't trust her duhhhhh."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Coal just laughed and shook his head.

"It's more complicated then that."

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Well I doubt 'Ravensoar' has any say on ceremonies idiot."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

This time Firekit rolled her eyes.

"Would you shut up? It's none of your buisness!" She said to Burnedkit.

Burnedkit's ruining all the fun. she thought sourly.

>Firekit<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Soooo your not the bos of me! I'm older!"

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Acting like that will get you no where." Bronzefeather snapped.

>Bronzefeather<

✠Ember✠ said...

"And acting like a goofball won't get the power will it?!"

~-~Burnedkit-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"can't help it." Bronzefeather laughed.

>Bronzefeather<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Cause you're mad right? We're all going to become mad?"

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Some day... somewhere.. over the rainbow... way up high.."

>Bronzefeather<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Yep. I'm doomed."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Ya sure are. Because you don't listen."

>Bronzefeather<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Why are you lying to that sshe-cat then? tell me. I'm here to listen "

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

Coal faced him "Lying to her? What makes you say that?"

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Cause I was told bad in BrokenClan never to be loving and soft like Ravensoar. He trusts everyone, he trusted Havoc."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Cat's change. Look at Bronzefeather for instance."

>Coal<

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Cat's change. Look at Bronzefeather for instance."

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"This was just before I was so rudely stolen by a bunch of crazies. If your right, and Chaos has been a warrior for moons, he didn't change that quickly. I'm all for lying though, tell me why, I'll play along."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"To stop Stark. That's why. Look at all the powers I have. Stark is keeping that all from you. If we get rid of him you shall be as powerful as I."

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Ohh. Ok. That's awesome. So how do we do this?"

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Get rid of coal. Then more cats that aren't supposed to enter the rift, the more Stark has to handle."

>Coal<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Hmm, ok."

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"And Blah blah blah blah blah. Why do you need me? I'm not evil." she said.

"You used to be. there's a block on your mind, let me fix that." he said, waving his tail and then Jaypaw gasped.

"Muddleblaze." She growled.

>Jaypaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

Burnedkit smiled "Welcome to the evil Place Jaypaw!!"

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Whatever." she muttered. "this place isn't evil. It's neutral."

>Jaypaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Well we're here. Which mean evil."

~-~Burunedkt~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"I'm not evil."

>Jaypaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Coal said u were!"

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Used to be. Now whether or not I will be again, I don't know." Jaypaw said.

"I just hope Muddleblaze doesn't come near me again. She'll probably wipe my mind again. That mouse-brain!"

>Jaypaw<

✠Ember✠ said...

"Whatever"

~-~Burnedkit~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Sorry. Talking to myself." she muttered.

>Jaypaw<